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07-12-04, 11:28 AM | #1 | ||||
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Disputes Within
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Every intricate incision on his patient intrigues his nerves Hair stands on end to see the scarlet cover their throats like a scarf Mind frame long beyond the status of mentally unstable He broke free of the shackles of humanity and morals The mans reason for existence is nothing more then the love of suffering To see the ones who once stared in hatred Squeeze their eyes shut in terror To him, he is doing good to the world Exterminating the world of these virii But he is not understood, even in the small sane part of his mind They have a family, let him go Grab the knife, show them the hatred they have grown Violence is the weapon of the ignorant They never understood you, you are nothing to them You have lost touch with reality The only reality you need, is the one you live right now The lives that cause you pain, Are in your hands The futures that told you had none, are under your control Grab ahold of your conscious Stop and think Knowing the consequences, why do you persist on this? He clears his mind… And continues his work… Follow each vein with your knife. As they are your path to freedom. Connect visually, and watch his life drain Watch as his mortality drips from his fingertips
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07-12-04, 11:37 PM | #2 | |||||
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This was an amazing piece, not only was it a great metaphor about one's own emotions, but it told a story that i could visualize in my mind and identify with, very deep meaning and beautiful man.....
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07-18-04, 10:34 AM | #3 | ||||
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thanks... uppin
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