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Old 07-13-04, 02:59 PM   #1
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Revenge (Part 2) ft. 2XL

IP: F88A A552

(Talking)
This is a story of when bitter enemies collide.
How the Past can blow up back in your Face
How you think everything is behind you when its only Catching Up
This is a thing that shouldn't be taken lightly, something only a few survive
As like in this story, you always pay the Price when you come to realize
Revenge is nothing Nice

(Hook) x3
You hurt someone, and someone else comes to hurt you/
You merk someone, and someone else comes to merk you/
Full circle, ya want revenge but it comes at a price/
An eye for an eye, a life for a life, revenge ain't nothin' nice/

(RJB's Verse)
I used to have this Friend who would roll wit me
Sell the Drugs and pop them shots and stay in Patrol wit me/
We ran the Blocks and he was always behind me when we fought the Cops
Until he told me that he got his head Cleared and then the Friendship Stopped/
It was the day I was planning some real down Dirty shit
Told him to have my back but instead he pulled out his fist and I got hit/
Made it clear that all them years we were down just went down the Drain
Got me busted put in Jail I swore on the Bible I'll make sure he feels my Pain/
Last I heard he had a Wife and a Kid, living a succesful Life
But in my eyes I still saw the bitch in him when I pulled out the Knife/
Traveled around his house that even had a Gate, saw in my eyes his Deadly Fate
Before I made my move I just sat back and stayed Patient, I had to wait/
This urging instinct to make this fucker go from a Man to being Extinct
He was the man who got me put behind Bars, his death was the Missing Link/
Now I jump in my Car to go meet up wit an Old friend who did me Wrong
Because the fucking Grave wit the Worms is where this Pussy Belongs/
Callin up his house so he can hear the Breath of the man that gonna bring him Death
Already have the guiltyness of commiting a Crime of being the Soul Theft/
So I see him kissing his Tramp and telling his Kid his last and Final Goodbye
Now Im walking up to this bitch because at the end of this, one of us is gonna Die//

(Hook) x3
You hurt someone, and someone else comes to hurt you/
You merk someone, and someone else comes to merk you/
Full circle, ya want revenge but it comes at a price/
An eye for an eye, a life for a life, revenge ain't nothin' nice/

(2XL's Verse)
Used to live the trife life, but somehow I escaped/
Did a bid in '98 for pushin weight, now my shits straight/
Got a kid, a wife, a nine to five, a house with a gate/
Yet sometimes I lay awake at night and think about fate/
If life was fair, shit, I know I’d be layin’ up in hearse/
Cuz memories of slain enemies follow me like a curse/
My life is worse in some ways cuz I know its not deserved/
Was headin’ in the wrong direction but I then swerved/
And did a one eighty, but maybe its too late to save me/
The other day some dudes drove past my house actin shady/
One of them cats looked familiar like I seen ‘em before/
Paranoid, checkin’ out the window, triple lockin my doors/
Of course it could all be in my imagination, exaggeration/
But I can’t shake the feeling that I’m lying in wait, stagnation/
Cuz my phone keeps ringin’, I pick up and just hear breathin’/
And cars keep peelin’ out in front of my house every evenin’/
Now I’m leavin’ for work, just kissed my wife and son goodbye/
I see this dude walkin’ my way, somethin’ aint right in his eyez/
Click: recognition, sudden visionz of a shoot-out wit hiz mans/
Way back, oh shit, now he’s reachin’ in his pocket with hiz hand and
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Old 07-13-04, 04:22 PM   #2
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dawg i don't know why you should bide me and yayo shit, what's next blood thicker than water part 2?
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Old 07-13-04, 09:23 PM   #3
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that was cool... i like 2xl's verse a lil more...but overall I give it a 5 (from 1 to 10)...concept could've been better...and the material was to basic...if you listen to Jay-z's song on reasonable doubt "Regrets", you kinda get a drift what I'm saying..his wordplay and material set the standard, but keep it up yo!
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