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07-14-04, 11:18 PM | #1 | |||
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"Cali Distance"...
IP: A001 97D8
[[Hook]]
I'm Goin Goin, Back Back, To Cali Cali... Bitch Im Back... Aint A Daym Thing Changed And As A Matter A Fact... Leave Ya Breatless, Like Botox Ya Always Stunned In My Pressance... My Style Original Every Run Around Like Some Christmas Presants... I'm Goin Goin, Back Back, To Cali Cali... Bitch Im Back... Aint A Daym Thing Changed And As A Matter A Fact... I Left This Shit And Now I'm Back To Re-Inact The Past... [[Verse]] These Half Ass Em-cees Blast Raps With Emp-ty... Graph Staffs Cuz Ya Send-eeng At-tacks Like Rem-y...(Plaaaaayd Out) Fast Pass These Senc-ry Back Lash Mem-ories... I'm Back At Bat Lef-ty But Collapse Tracks With Two Hands Like Amba-dextries... Let These Schemes Tackle A Set Three To Leave A Genie Baffled... And Get Me Some Tree Saddles So I Get Seen As One To Leave The Loose Leaf Rattled... Check Me Like Free Brothles As I Press Beef Like Deceased Cattle... Step East Like Biggie Travled But Left Eased After I Seazed The Battles... [[Goodnight]] The Boy Of Most Consistant... Mischief.. Child Of First Instance... Returning As I Watch Cali Fade To The Distance... |
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07-15-04, 11:32 AM | #2 | ||||
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IP: 899F 26A3
nice drop man
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07-15-04, 11:32 AM | #3 | |||
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IP: A001 97D8
Upping...
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07-15-04, 11:47 AM | #4 | ||||
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IP: 3382 7DC4
nice you should put that on audio!!!!
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07-15-04, 01:44 PM | #5 | |||||
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tight drop homie
some good vocab, saw some multi's ur flow was good i liked the hook 2.... all i can say is keep writtin....peace homie can ya drop some feed on my writtin (I am Durmil, I am Ill)...thanx |
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07-16-04, 02:24 PM | #6 | |||
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IP: A001 97D8
Upping...
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07-17-04, 11:02 AM | #7 | |||||
Loyalty proven
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IP: 3CF2 7138
yea man nice drop. the hook was hot, and you had some real complexity in ya verse. but even though it was the shortest part, I liked the closer the best. it tied everything together
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07-18-04, 08:51 AM | #8 | |||
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IP: A001 97D8
Lololmao...
Everyone Loves That Ending For Some Reason... |
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07-18-04, 11:55 AM | #9 | |||||
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IP: 4289 77F4
this was a nice drop man, it had good flow, was boppin to it, you had some good wordplay in there, and i liked the chorus and the ending also, this would be a dope audio song.......good job....keep it up...
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07-18-04, 10:19 PM | #10 | |||
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IP: A001 97D8
Thanx Alot Fem...
People Are Starting To Open Their Eyes To My Work... I Apreciate It Alot, Thanks... ~One~ |
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