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Old 07-19-04, 01:04 AM   #1
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Real Murk Street Glory Part 1 Intro As soon as I get signed I'll probaily win some grammy's
I'm Showtime Wit more heat and diesel then Miami
I'm not grimey , But I seen worst than when Tony Killed Manny
When I was younger I watched Boys In The Hood
When half of ya'll nigga's was probaily watching Bambi
Where I'm from we don't play baseball but we sling the wood like Sammy
Some say I'm Wrong by my actions But I usaually disagree by many ways
I'm hotter than most summer days
you should think twice before you fuck wit me
Because you a see it pays
the last thing you a ever see Is the gauge
Bust the tech at ya dome so it can give you braids
I'm the type of nigga who a clap you like you on stage
on the block selling that yae,DopeBoy wit more white
then a place where people iceskate
My watch got so much ice the face look like a clear blue lake
I get more head than a porno tape
Bust lead Felling like I can afoird another Mistake
If you put my CD in a oven it a burst into flames when It bakes
So many wanta be G's in the game,and realy like half of them fake
niggas is pussies now and days, cause they talk to the Jakes
So by this way I chill i don't be mad, How could I
When I get more Kneck than a Soilder Rag.Nigga!!!
WudddddUUUp!!!!
Beat: Lloyd Banks "Just Another day"
Big Mike Cruel Summer part.3
(thats the beat I wrote over)
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Old 07-19-04, 01:51 AM   #2
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Old 07-19-04, 04:52 PM   #3
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Old 07-19-04, 05:49 PM   #4
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its aiight, sounds kinda like u didnt put thought into it, but u got a bit of decent punch lines in there...so keep workin at it
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Old 07-19-04, 06:17 PM   #5
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It's a freestyle off the top So I put my thoughts into it If I did'nt you would be reading nothing step ya talk up nigga ride out!!!1
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Old 07-19-04, 06:58 PM   #6
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