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Old 07-19-04, 04:25 AM   #1
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Str8_hood and KaNg kOrRuPt present. . . Don't Give Up

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(Hook)
Dont give up we can break through
This poverty stay strong dont let it take you
And all ya problems going on in ya life
Keep ya head up cause it will be alright
Let all the pain and the anguish that remake you
Disintergrate dont feel down cause people hate you
Stand tall never give into the ways of the devil
You aint alone we in this struggle together


(KaNg)
This songs for all my people working day and night shift
Raising kids whos liftin stores livin lives as drunk stiffs
Not using god given gifts perpetuating the hood
We got opprotunities but our chances aint good
To land a solid job with a high payroll
Cause people judge on looks not the contents of the soul
It gets old being broke and poor
Walkin out ur front door
Seeing the same drunk sleeping by the corner store
Gangsters still runnin the block hearing the glock
Pop pop and another body drops
We need to stop and realize what we got
U dont need to be gangsta we dont need to be a bunch of hot
Headed teens, conniving crack fiends, pregnant beauty queens
We're all acting obscene
I aint puttin down the hood im attacking it clean
While drug dealers sellin drugs stackin tha green
But i've seen hope for lost teens
Who use their minds to change their outter surroundings
People perfecting their skillz and speaking out
Getting better and wiser thats what lifes all about


(Hook)
Dont give up we can break through
This poverty stay strong dont let it take you
And all ya problems going on in ya life
Keep ya head up cause it will be alright
Let all the pain and the anguish that remake you
Disintergrate dont feel down cause people hate you
Stand tall never give into the ways of the devil
You aint alone we in this struggle together


(Str8_hood)
Im tired of the struggle everyday people suffering
Losing loved ones from the act of being a thug
Homeless tugging on ur clothes askin for loose change
I tell them keep ya head up tomorrow's a new day
Nowhere to go cuase they broke they in they old age
So i feel sorrow for sayin no up in they poor face
I wish that god could come down and shed his light on them
From the bottom pick them up and try to preach on them
Reach down stick with them like theirs a leech on them
All the valuable lessons that you could teach on them
We missing chunks out of our lives like a street filled with potholes
Going through drama and problems that only god knows
While other people brag about what they got flaunting their maybach's
To the day back aint no where i was going like a stray cat
You gave me my guidance give them a similar plan
Critisized for being broke dont wanna be victims of that
All they need is the slightest bit of hope for them to come through
Distractions and barriers to break through because they want you
Dont cut them down when you see them they on a mission
They been tryin to make it right you the only piece that they missing


(Hook)
Dont give up we can break through
This poverty stay strong dont let it take you
And all ya problems going on in ya life
Keep ya head up cause it will be alright
Let all the pain and the anguish that remake you
Disintergrate dont feel down cause people hate you
Stand tall never give into the ways of the devil
You aint alone we in this struggle together
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Old 07-19-04, 06:32 AM   #2
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ayo hit us up with some feeeeeeeedback
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Old 07-19-04, 02:12 PM   #3
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ayo give us some feedback
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Old 07-19-04, 02:24 PM   #4
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i see ya'll went for a more serious mood. it was official. I was feelin how ya'll was comin off from a thug side but tryin to deliver a message. keep at it, its all goin work out someday
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Old 07-19-04, 02:37 PM   #5
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to be honest i didnt really like it. the only part of it that i was even feelin was Kangs verse. Sorry but the overall drop was weak
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Old 07-19-04, 02:44 PM   #6
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ok ok lets get more feedback
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Old 07-19-04, 05:50 PM   #7
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well str8 and me is koo but the truth is that was weak yall the conecpt was kinda bad if u put it in different words it wouldve been good
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Old 07-20-04, 11:26 PM   #8
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Old 07-20-04, 11:34 PM   #9
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i thought this was pretty good,just kang's verse tho.str8,elevate dawg,youll get there.
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Old 07-20-04, 11:39 PM   #10
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Hey Kang,dont forget to drop your verse in our battle.
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Old 07-21-04, 01:19 AM   #11
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yo i liked how somebody did somethin differnt for a change and had some real rap... only thing i didnt like was da hook and dats it... everything else was kool lookin foward 2 anotha collab from ya'll nikkaz look out for mine 2 i think iwanna colab with a nigga from my crew so hope yaw like it peace nikka ~1~
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