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no freeposting more then three times your dq'd
no feeding off of other guys verse
up your battle more than three times in a row your dq'd
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REMEMBER in your check in thread you must edit it with 5 vote links, if not you will be subtracted a vote every time you are missing a link!!!!

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R.I.P OMB

To Be Honest...I Don't Know Why I Bothered

Here we go...

I'd hate to say this but this is 1 sided aint no boxing match/
Both guys have towels to their arms ready to drop coz they aint battle cats/

Motif the real Dreamcast throwback saw u...and threw you back/
And Iwillripyou says it all really a name like that Destined to be wack/

Only way u two hittin hard is if u snortin strong on crack/
U can 'handicap' this battle...but i guarentee u'll give each others smacks/*

Guy's u couldn't make a master plan if u joined 'master minds'/
U could try but why u like home alone crooks gettin hurt by a kid @ 9/

So here's my list; motif! U wack, iwillripyou...na aint checked in yet/
But like a confident bookie...their crapness is a safe bet/

10 lines i'm done...

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R.I.P OMB

To Be Honest...I Don't Know Why I Bothered

Lol hmmm will isnt gonna show i dont think..


Run the "Boards" Make his Mind have to cash rent Checks..
...Turn Carnivor and Eat this Pussy's Verse call me T-Rex..
Make u Chry-Slers more then Bad Motors made by "Mopar"..
Inject My Verse into your Blood Make your Artirys Char..
Your More "Go Active" then a Mcdonalds Adult Toy..
Co-Lead with Tony u cant Handle it Your just a Decoy..
The way u battle Herbs They should just flow Toward-Yea..
Just Beat the "Bull" Dog Like i was a 1 Man Def. for Georgia..

quik key

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Ok Other Guy Must Be Dques 4 Not checkin But Any Way

Opener-

I'd hate to say this but this is 1 sided aint no boxing match/
Both guys have towels to their arms ready to drop coz they aint battle cats/

6/10

Run the "Boards" Make his Mind have to cash rent Checks..
...Turn Carnivor and Eat this Pussy's Verse call me T-Rex..

8/10

Section/Motif

Closer

So here's my list; motif! U wack, iwillripyou...na aint checked in yet/
But like a confident bookie...their crapness is a safe bet/

lol Alright 8/10

The way u battle Herbs They should just flow Toward-Yea..
Just Beat the "Bull" Dog Like i was a 1 Man Def. for Georgia..

9.2/10 Nice

winner-Motif

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Punches-Tie
Personals-Motif...both had one and Motif's was better
Flow-Motif
Wordplay-Motif
Creativity-Motif
Overall-Motif....for a superior verse....good battle tho

Motif:
ps: that chry-sler line was pretty creative....

wut happned to the third person.......

omg.. i really dont want to offend anyone here but after reading the first verse.. i was think "jesus this guy must be new or sumthin... he's gonna get ripped a new asshole." but no... the second kid came wack too..... both WACKITY WACKITY WACK WACK WACK!!!!.. you both need to understand the concept of a punch.. which is obviously short for PUNCHLINE.. which is the funny part after the setup.. neither of you really attempted ANY wordplay or ANY punchlines.... it was all basic statemental shit..... vote: the second guy coz his structure wasnt fucked

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^ye what he said...both of you dropped shit. I would say Motif gets this because he put slightly more effort into his shit punches than Mad Dog did. Both need to elevate alot.

Vote-Motif.

uppin for votes...i'll edit this with my vote tomorrow

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My vote goes to Motif. He had way better wordplay and multis. I was feelin his verse cuz it flowed better also. Both did a good job though.

Punches: motif
Structure: maddog
Multis: motif
Metas: motif
Flow: Motif

Vote: Motif

this was a pretty good battle props to both battlers.

MAd Dog, your verse was pretty good. You however didn't have that many hard hittin' punches. Yo flow was good, but it went off a tiny bit, in some places. But overall it was pretty good

Motif, you had a good verse too. You had some nice hard hittin' punches in there. You flow was hot too. Overall, a very nice battle. Props to both of you for a good one.

v/Motif

Please return the favor wit honest vote on:
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=136188

v/Motif
Both dropped pretty bad in this but Motif was better of the 2 with harder hitting punches..
pz.

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