jus a lil sumtin 4 ya 2 critique

started off wit jus bein ah beatboxer beat boxin the lunchroom
the future who would assume that wha i was spewin would be the truest
2 who eva i would so be an influence
dedicated 2 the achievence of 4 zero profits
spittin till my for front resemble a frosted bottle of hypnotic
broken record i told u before
that i will not be e mobile until i bring it 2 your headquaters
pisstle whip any of ya men in general
mark off that captain and re assign me 2 the position of general
when i speak the streets listnin
2 every fuckin sentence that im currently spittin
put depot, aco, black and decker in bankruptcy by the numba of tools that i have in my possession
undastand u will neva get the chance 2 unstrip my title as a man
i den ben in the trenches for years
battelin actor ass rappers who thought they had futures bruised into tears
i will neva let u get my tempature and pressure tested
ignore the petty shit u bound 2 undastand that i came gifted
wit the prescence 2 erase any of ya so called weapons
lessons get blessed every time i open my lips

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