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10/15
no br
no bitein
no repostin from shit u said in any of ya otha verses or battlez
no crew votez
no wack shit

verse due 30 minz after check in

im waitin on u 2 check in

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Checkin in but i'm at work so if i am a lil late then don't be mad.

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Ya BiTch FA ShO!

this my check in
im sendin my verse

dont b 2 late boo

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No Offense Ma

Ok so they got me postin up wit Mizz Misstress come back Mizz Clit Less
Fuckin wit Troop Mr Dicked Gifted take time 2 get well benefitted wit Prick
Frontin like u aint Knew who Run It Like u aint got my Juniors in ya Stomach
Look Slut take Baby steps before i Fucks Ya Throat up till Point of Throwup
Move u 2 the Block so u can finally put in Work babygirl down 2 get Sperm
Plastered Full Front along her shirt i understand that u rep in a fuckin Skirt
But for no chick do i control flappin my Gumminz do ya job eat these Yungins
I aint even in a Ferrari F 50 for u 2 be tempted 2 F me quickly run wit Magnums
that deliver Deadly Dick Like A Detective from the Confirmative Action Famen'z
Please dont get ya back pushed in like a Shoppin Cart dont get em 2 startin
Mizzstresss? Can tell you get Sticks harder than a front plate from a Spartin
Patience a Virtue stop lettin them Nutz Work cuz now i dont respect ya's
the Population now knows that u den sucked mo brain than Hannibal Lectar

lol

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You supposed ta be a man whateva happened to that?
You ain't a TROOPER, cuz if you were you wouldn't be standin' in tha line of attack
While I'm sittin' at work you ova there strokin ya keys
Go get a Job Nigga Mickey D's is hir-ing
Ya not tha best and I'm afraid ta tell ya
Go Gatha ya troops so I can get tha gat and Splatta
All ya brains this bitch is insane
I'm runnin, you at a stand still cuz i'm hard to attain
Yo let me end this and get back to my bidness
Thankx for the battle I hope next time u take it serious

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Ya BiTch FA ShO!

j trooper got this....

Punches- weak both sides
flow- troop
originality- neither
multies- neither
wordplay- j
structure- rapmistress

final vote j troop

both peep my battle n vote fair. ..1
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=136693

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it was a wea battle but j troop took it in mah opinion

he had flow , werd play, and punches by a lil

sorry ma but my voe is j troop

it was a wea battle but j troop took it in mah opinion

he had flow , werd play, and punches by a lil

sorry ma but my voe is j troop

it was a wea battle but j troop took it in mah opinion

he had flow , werd play, and punches by a lil

sorry ma but my voe is j troop

it was a wea battle but j troop took it in mah opinion

he had flow , werd play, and punches by a lil

sorry ma but my voe is j troop

uppin

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not gonna waste my time givin' a full breakdown...

J_Trooper: Weak Verse...but atleast der was personals...holler at cats to help you elevate.

RapMisstress: Nope...atleast ur first line was decent...but the rest of the verse fell of horribly...and the ending was a true filler.

Overall: Vote Trooper...Mistress had probably the best line of the battle...but trooper's verse overall overpowers it.

Return the favour and honestly vote on my battle against DaTruth plz. thank you.

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Currently Open Battles:
T West vs. Kizza

this was pretty wack... still no competition tho:

Punches - JTrooper
Flow - JTrooper
Creativity - JTrooper
Multis - um... I guess JTrooper
Structure - Mistress
Fun Factor: JTrooper

v. JTrooper

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not spendin all da on this vote
RapMisstress-You just had a lot of bull shit in yur verse...you didn't come out discouraged tho....no multies, punches missed..they were weak....you need elevation

J- you definitely over powered this "insane bitch" like she would say...lol...you had some multies good punches...small battle but interesting....you definitely won

v/J_Trooper

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