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07-23-04, 02:50 PM | #1 | ||||||
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Hot Horror Rhyme
IP: 44B2 361B
One, two, one, two, fuck that lets get straight to business
Shut your mouth or be on the recievin end of my gun, thus Dead on the street with more red than a blood at a thug convention Pay attention whilst I elevate on this track and take you to a new dimension I’ll live forever through these tracks, my beefs are like bird shit Don’t make me drop it, turn your dog around if he comes for me like bull pit I’m not scared, I made this horror like ‘Wes Craven’, you cravin For me to kill you, so I came with this blade and left your heart shaven Ya’ll beds for my guns don’t make me put you to sleep I’m not tiredness but ill kill you and through you over a bridge, fuck 6 feet deep Fuck ‘Candy man’, don’t even say my name, or ill eat you up for dessert like a cannibal Last night when I was hungry I ate ‘Hannibal’ for a snack like a fukin animal Paybacks a bitch, So he was a bitch and that was payback Suck your blood dry like ‘Dracula’ and with a ‘chainsaw’ attack Fuckin ‘massacre’, fuck ‘Texas’ I’ll do it all over the world and on my tracks Horror songs like ‘scary movie’ soundtracks, ‘sequel’ in progress as I write Fuck the chick in the end and get screwed more times then fukin ‘Frankenstein’ Am I cursed? My birthdays on ‘Friday the 13th’ nah ill be totally fine Last yr for my birthday I got the ‘Exorcist’ and not the DVD I got it inside of me so I stabbed myself to death n called myself ‘Jason’ Set myself on fire and put it back out by jumping in a water basin Did this mothafukin shit all night till I was allowed to join the devil freemason |
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07-23-04, 03:55 PM | #2 | ||||||
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IP: 3240 794D
nice ish....good flow and nice rhymes....vocab was a lil shifty....multis could help it.....but overall nice piece.....Onez
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07-23-04, 06:24 PM | #3 | |||||
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IP: D135 D6AF
good shit my ni99 but work on ya complexity and struc and wordplay
nice punches tho keep hustlin playa
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07-23-04, 06:25 PM | #4 | |||||
~Break Bred or Play Dead~
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IP: D135 D6AF
any of ya ni99az wanna throw them thangs
holla at me u kno where 2 find me
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07-23-04, 06:46 PM | #5 | ||||||
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IP: 3B25 245C
ayo thanxs dogz
more feedback?? |
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07-24-04, 04:43 AM | #6 | ||||||
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IP: 3698 ADD5
uppin for some more feedback!!!
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