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White Dove - My Prayer
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White Dove - My Prayer Written By Timeless To Rebecca, whose song of hope has soothed my heart. I am rejoicing in the promising news of your upcoming treatment. Rest, sweet dove, rest, and later we will talk. My mind confused, my spirit worn The mist had veiled the summer morn And there in life’s obscurity Were truths I now had come to see As though this soul had been reborn And clothed in sweet serenity :: For though a prayer had passed my lips A whisper that through silence rips A simple prayer that jolts the core And scathes the nerves of every sore In grayness of the dawn’s eclipse A prayer I’d uttered long before :: The plea was for a simple sign A spoken word, a phrase divine A flash of light upon my brow That I may understand somehow And that He soothe this heart of mine As on a bended knee I bow :: My heart was laden with the plight Of someone who had brought me light Who in my troubled days had prayed And on my bed a rose had laid In blackness of a winter night And there with me her fragrance stayed :: And now I voice an urgent prayer That He produce a sign somewhere To offer me some hope and love A song that I’ve been dreaming of With lyrics dancing in the air…… And to my window came a dove :: It was a bird with wings of white That came to rest from feathered flight A white dove of serenity A white dove who embellished me with coos that rustled in the night As though she set God’s music free :: The place to rest was but a choice Her murmurs were God’s holy voice And in the dark air crisp and pure I knew that there would be a cure And reasons that I could rejoice For this, God’s sign, precise and sure :: Oh, white dove, may your beauty shine Upon this fragile face of mine So delicate your wing of white So grand the music of your flight That I may choose to spend my time Beside this window of delight ~Love you~ Last edited by Timeless : 07-23-04 at 07:41 PM. |
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07-23-04, 04:33 PM | #2 | |||||||
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nice timeless.....the only cool RW member.........nice peice....nice use of imagery....see mine in my sig...ive imprved lots....
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07-23-04, 07:46 PM | #3 | ||||||
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thank you mr chase uppin..................................
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07-23-04, 09:03 PM | #4 | ||||
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what a talent u have....beautiful work...i wish I could write aswll as u do...much respect
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07-24-04, 02:10 PM | #5 | |||||
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that was really pretty.. let me rephrase that beautiful and a very nice set up..
good work keep it up! ~wun~
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