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Old 07-24-04, 03:13 PM   #1
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Thug Family

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Get your heat proof umbrellas out coz I’m spittin fire
My wickedness n craziness goes together like Gene Wilder n Richard Pryor
Wilder than fukin thugs celebrating prior to a bank heist
Thugs rockin suede Timbs, iced out with jewels biggin up Christ
Jesus, they left no survivors n no fukin money, blew up the safe
Killed the fukin hostages, and went back to the basement, they safe
From the feds, they need the fukin money, how else they guna b fed?
Niggaz ain’t heard of jobs, they bloods n crips sleepin in blue n red
Eatin nuttin but candy and crisps makin friends with they own led
I’ll call this calibre Caleb and this one Fred, tomorro you guna b in sum1’s head
Niggaz dnt trust anything that walks, they trust crime n crime they wed
Hubby fukin crime the wifey, they got kids, that’s right, turned out to be ‘twinz’
They called berettas, born with a desire to kill, surname vendetta
Fuck gettin-a education these old g’s will teach me the way
Teach me to slay, teach me to weigh, teach me never to betray
I portray them as my path leading the way for me to be the leader this way
Leader of the game, crack and rap, this is the fukin way I play
Come out to play wen niggaz least expect it like a power cut
Cut open your fukin heart and spill open your fukin guts
I’m a fukin terrier dnt mistake me for a mutt
You faggots aren’t sniffin coke, you sniffin buts
No fukin wonder I smell shit every time you fukin come up
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Old 07-24-04, 03:46 PM   #2
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uppin for some feedback!!
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Old 07-24-04, 04:26 PM   #3
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in the beginning, especially line 2 is stretched, but other than that i like it

i dunno what id give it, mabe a 7.5 out of 10 or better
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Old 07-24-04, 04:40 PM   #4
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thanxs man
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Old 07-25-04, 05:17 AM   #5
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Uppin For Some Feedback!!!!!!!!
Dnt Sleep!!!!!!!
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Old 07-25-04, 05:20 AM   #6
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That was pretty good, my favorite line:

Eatin nuttin but candy and crisps makin friends with they own led
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Old 07-25-04, 05:44 AM   #7
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Old 07-26-04, 10:03 AM   #8
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Yo Dat's Cool Cuz Keep Doin Wah Cha Doin
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Old 07-26-04, 01:15 PM   #9
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Old 07-27-04, 02:07 PM   #10
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uppin for some more feedback!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Old 07-27-04, 02:17 PM   #11
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yo,that was good do u wanna do a remix wit me and u spitten bout the same thing like "THUG FAMILY" PART 2
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Old 07-27-04, 02:38 PM   #12
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this was preety good i like the flow the idea was aight, ya had a basic idea but u made some creative lines that made it a decent read... not bad keep droping them..

7.3 outta 10

can u drop a comment and some feed back on my shit...

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Old 07-27-04, 03:36 PM   #13
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just use my verse and u write one n make a collabo
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