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Old 07-26-04, 03:48 AM   #1
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Ruined Love

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The Years we Spent Together Will always be Cherished..

The Years we Spent together I could Cherish Them Forever..
Love'n all Our Times Evan Saw you Through the Bad Weather..
You Completed My Heart Shaped into The Perfect Pieces..
Toward the End I could u feel the Drift and The Love Ciezes..

The Years we Spent together Last Forever in my Heart

You probally wondered How i couldnt Notice Your Late Nights..
Maybe you just didnt Notice i always left on the Porch Lights..
I would Watch you form our Window Knowing all My Pain..
Puzzled at what ive done Just Leaving my Mind Strained..

The Years we Spent together Melt Away all my Pain

Take My Pain Away i Prayed to God Night after Night..
Loseing My True Love to another Man my only Fright..
Heart Shattered to the Ground on the Floor were i Stood..
If i could reverse whatever ive done Wrong i Would..

The Years we Spent Lost in one Singel Moment

I Just wanted to Let this End Now i couldnt take it Anymore..
Couldnt Imagine what a Life Without you would be InStore..
Then The Day i Said something you Just decided to Confess..
At Least My Thoughts can Stop and Put My Soul to Rest..

The Years we Spent togetherOur Now Lost in the Wind


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Old 07-26-04, 04:11 AM   #2
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damn kidd feelin dat drop...very emotional and good imagery...really likin it...keep it comin...peace
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Old 07-26-04, 05:51 AM   #3
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Very Good Motif
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Old 07-27-04, 05:49 PM   #4
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Thnx for the Feed
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Old 07-27-04, 05:58 PM   #5
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nice

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i got to say man, i was feelin that big time,

did it really happen?

i sense alot of emotion about that piece, , , kepp it goin . .
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