YO if u haven't been thru shit like this then u've heard or seen it, cos its everywhere, most people don't tackle issues like this, so I decided to, peep n reply ~one~

(I put my name in this, but I ain't this guy I wrote about)

:: Hook ::
U beg u plead, deep in your heart u bleed
Drop to your knees, n scream n disbelief
Why am I the one who takes all the grief
Why can't I leave, when love is literaly killin me

:: Country ::
When Susan was eight-teen, she would drift off n day-dream
About the day-she, would engage-Steve, as the man she let fate-bring
How come he couldn't remain-sweet, she cries as he makes her face-bleed
Its always the same-thing, to many vodka-tonics
She's got-ta-stop-it, but the fear makes her cough-n-vomit
Escape is common-knowledge, before flowers get placed on-top-her-coffin
But love blocks-her-thoughts-n, she thinks this-is-life
He says he hits-his-wife, because he can't fix-his-mind
Now she has a kid-inside, he says he'll stop jus give-it-time
Alcohol makes him wish-it-died, as he screams "I don't think this-is-mine"
She sees something different in-his-eyes, as he gets-his-knife
She begs "Steve this-isn't-right", please lets discuss-this
But he's mad, so he stabs, at her pregnant-stomach
Susan can't feel her legs-n-plumets, as he takes her neck-n-cuts-it
Steve says fuck-this, now he's gonna overdose-with-pills
Thru his last breath, he says, "if I can't have her no-one-will"

:: Hook ::
U beg u plead, deep in your heart u bleed
Drop to your knees, n scream n disbelief
Why am I the one who takes all the grief
Why can't I leave, when love is literaly killin me

:: Miss_Jess ::
His vision is blurry,impossible for him to see clear
He can smell my anxiety,feel my frightful fear
Rage in his eyes,mind confused: life featuring cocaine
Destroyin everything in his way like a hurricane
Ashtrays crushin against the wall,bruises all over my body
From the outside:happy family,in reality:cheap and shoddy
When sun slowly disappears,darkness surrounds his heart
His anger tears apart every bit of me, every body part
Is broken,my tears go by unnoticed,blind for my love
Struggling to walk trough the door but can't let go of
Walkin on thin line between hate and love,heaven and hell
Afraid to open up,all day withdrawn in my safe shell

His wife is cryin behind tha crime-scene
..."I remember the time-when he used to be so nice-n-smilin,
where has the time-went why did i let this jock pop-my-hymen"

:: Country ::
"STOP DENYIN-IT!" you'll neva take my ass out alive-again
Cos as soon as ya'll attempt-tha-suprisement-shit
I swear I'm using this bullet to indent-my-mind-ta-split
I'm broke, without a car and licence-less
Right-with-this bitch's life goes mine so I'm two times-as-pissed
So what I hit her...now I'll blast this cunt's third-eye-ta-myst
What time is it? this run is over good-bye-n-ridence
Dont overract-and get all crazy drop the strap-man and kick it past officer Casey
Dont single-handidly crush this ladies whole family
All she had was you Tamminy, nod your head if your even understandin-me...*NODS*
Domestic violence is no reason for this to end in sirens
Gun flashes and eventually your life presence in silence
So take my advice-n hand over the hostage the way we designed-it
"Fuck you-n-this-heater I will never delete-her life all I did was beat-her" *CLICK...BOOM*

:: Hook ::
U beg u plead, deep in your heart u bleed
Drop to your knees, n scream n disbelief
Why am I the one who takes all the grief
Why can't I leave, when love is literaly killin me

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damn: why waste time with all the other bullshit that gos on in Open Mic, this the real shit right here.

itll make a nice collab, hottes drop ive seen in ages, good job... Pm me when yall do your next one. im definately down.

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quote your own damn lyrics...

thanks verbal...i'll hit u up

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^uppin

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yo dats dat shit. I'm feelin tha hell outta dat

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Tha Battle (Tech Skillz Diss 2)
Tech Skillz Diss
Fuk Tha Rules

thanks unknown...uppin

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hot shit dawg...that was mad ill...keep em commin ~1~

uppin

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was really feelin it...somethin different but good

uppin this OM, this is da real deal right here!

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nice shit yo

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Lyrical Materminds

BigBootyChick

^Thx for feedback...

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yea...i was feelin that fo sho...was good and long, well thought, good vocab, multies, hook was good...one of the hottest colabs ive seen 2 date....good job both of you...

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