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Old 08-02-04, 01:46 AM   #1
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Thumbs down yea. i. suck. lol.

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but i dont care!


this was made when my 5month gf broke up outta no where.


been almost a month now since, and w/e lol.


i kno, it sucks lmao, the few rhymes are cheap. my vocab sucks. but w/e lol.
just tell me ways to improve.
i had some more but thye got deleted.

its in a pic format cus i wanted it in my AIM pro but couldnt fit it, so i had to do that....






WMD's Blast = Weapon Of Mass Destruction's Blast (lol, couldnt think of nething else.)


feedback plz. thx.
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Old 08-02-04, 01:50 AM   #2
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nice drop kidd...know where ur comin from wit dat...cuz right now all da shyt i've dropped is bout me n my x girl...so ya...mos def a nice dropp...u need 2 work on ya vocab but then so do i...had alot of emotion in it....keep it comin kidd...peace
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Old 08-02-04, 02:55 AM   #3
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i understand ur work.. it may not be the best but if u gotta let it out this way, then do so.. there's no hate in that.. take ur time if you want quality to kick in.. aight do ur thang..
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Old 08-02-04, 12:58 PM   #4
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yo it was aight sun you dont suck i read some shit that sucks and your way better so keep at it poetry is feeling all you need to do is find people who feel the same way you do
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Old 08-02-04, 02:08 PM   #5
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aright, thx all for the feedback...
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