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08-07-04, 11:46 PM
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The Truth
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Uncertain Mind
IP: B682 856F
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My Life Backwards My Mind Confuised.. Hatred for this Time Emotion is Abused.. Finding the Right Path a Strenious Goal.. Like thee Abise come to Swallow me Whole.. Explain Why i Remain in this State of Pain Lost in My Own World Pulling Away and Away.. Unable to stay on track Loseing time of Day.. Floating away from My Soul Lost in The Time line.. My Body removed from the Sancuary of Design.. Explain Why i Feel all this Pain is So Real Expecting to Be Released from this Strain.. By Fighting the Pain what can my Life Gain.. Remove the Clouds from My Life let Me See.. Take My Uncertenty Away Set My Mind Free.. Explain Why You held My in this Horrible Phase
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08-09-04, 06:24 PM
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to deep for me to actully understand the meaning of the peom, as to what u are really talkin about...but i would have to say that the peom seem to make u out to be in a seriuos deppression and if thats what the meaning of the poem is...then i can feel ya pain very well..1
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08-10-04, 08:07 PM
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<<-Carpe Noctum->>
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IP: 28AD 5545
i thought this was a real raw piece, your words described your feelings very well, and i think this is a poem people can relate to whenthey feel lost, nice job man....i like reading your work........
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