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Pro-Rican 0 0%
String9487 5 100.00%
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Old 08-09-04, 11:06 PM   #1
Hitchcock
 
String9487 vs Pro-Rican

IP: B9AB 64CC

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Old 08-09-04, 11:07 PM   #2
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Pro-Rican has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-09-04 11:07 PM.
 
Old 08-09-04, 11:17 PM   #3
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String9487 has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-09-04 11:17 PM.
 
Old 08-09-04, 11:24 PM   #4
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Pro-Rican's vere:

nigga battle me i sip bacardi and start laughin/
String gets more on his KNEES then born again catholics/
battling me is like climbing broken stairs cause you never steppin/
your punches are more like jabs and they both missin/
nigga you a "sweet kid" pedophilaics wanna bone ya/
i still out vote you even if ya had mulitple personas/
i anhiliate ya dense matter...you aint phat just Fatter/
nigga couldn't even test me even if he knew the answers/
niggas on this site must be sensless cause your rymes no one feels/
this cat ride with the PROS even with his training wheels/
i seen more flow then this dude in a toilet flush/
this guy aint heavyweight cause my watch weighs more than he does/
i be tight in this battle like fat asses with black leather/
this nigga only been HOT once cause of the weather/
I cave his chest in as his shoulders touch/
this nigga string is SQEEKY CLEAN cause hes all washed UP/
 
Old 08-10-04, 12:16 AM   #5
Hitchcock
 
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anybody peepin this battle can see he garbage
Pro-Rican get sprayed like a graffitti artist
stop frontin, cuz shit, u aint never gon b best
name sound sorta like a u Terror squad reject
believe that, ima leave this dumb Rican leakin
for speakin that dumb shit, bet he'll b deep sleepin
u aint hard n plus u dont pack..never
how gon b a pro wit that newbie track record
i got many rap accolades, u dont have any medals
im an "elevator" battler, u get dissed on many "levels"
u just a pussy and i k now u wont attack
so learn from number 23 and dont come back
why runnin ya mouth? u must b stupid fam
ya boy carry around mo steel than Superman
i hope u got doc's i hope u know nurses
stop rockin the Con's and switch to pro verses
im on topu can bet its no accident
cuz i go thru wack MC's like laxatives
u should b smart and avoid this "Ese"
cuz ya flow is so frio n mines is MUY CALIENTE


caliente-very hot
frio=cold
 
Old 08-10-04, 12:31 AM   #6
Hitchcock
 
IP: B9AB 64CC

uppin for votes holla at me n i'll return the favor
 
Old 08-10-04, 12:32 AM   #7
Adam
 
From: Canada
IP: A0C8 44A9

Voted For: String9487

nice drop by string....good personals...usin the spanish..dope idea...good flow, structure and good punches and wordplay

pro-rican - you also had a good verse, with good flow and structure, punches were there same with personals...i just felt that string came harder and had better personals

v/string

please drop a honest vote on this battle..its just a puncline so its not that big of a hassel i took the time for you two
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Old 08-10-04, 12:42 AM   #8
DV8
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IP: 88E6 6CAA

Voted For: String9487

im gonna go with string on this 1..both had horrible rhyme schemes though...like 2 bars without having a good rhyme...aight punches go ta string to ..this battle aint nothin ta be proud of though you both could've done alot better...no hate but you's dint do good on personals either..n string had the better structure n flow cause of it....pro...you gotaa fix those stretched lines ta fix your flow...

return the vote
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Old 08-10-04, 01:10 AM   #9
MC_SYX
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Voted For: String9487

aight prorican was really comin hard and i was feelin it, but string just came back and hit hard

vote: String

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Old 08-10-04, 06:45 PM   #10
chitownsoulja
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Voted For: String9487

good battle both u guys had
nice punchlines but this
has gotta go to string
he got u wit a couple nice punchlines
his structure was alright
not to many personals from either side
this battles goin to string

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Old 08-10-04, 07:13 PM   #11
Pro-Rican
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Yo string whats with the return the favor shit?

Damn son you had to kill it...I murked you doggz...no comments after the battle...dont ask for votes or have "favor" in the sentence.
 
Old 08-10-04, 07:20 PM   #12
DV8
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yo...return the favour n vote on battles...peeps vote on yours so return the favour....
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Old 08-10-04, 10:26 PM   #13
Ill-Grammatix
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From: Flatbush, Brooklyn
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Voted For: String9487

best lines in this battle:

i got many rap accolades, u dont have any medals
im an "elevator" battler, u get dissed on many "levels"~good set-up and finish

u should b smart and avoid this "Ese"
cuz ya flow is so frio n mines is MUY CALIENTE~ nice closer

worst lines in this battle:

battling me is like climbing broken stairs cause you never steppin/
your punches are more like jabs and they both missin/~ doesn't rhyme

i anhiliate ya dense matter...you aint phat just Fatter/
nigga couldn't even test me even if he knew the answers/~ again, doesn't rhyme...and it was weak

who am i kidding?... the whole verse was weak... easy battle to decide due to the fact that none of pro's lines beat either one of the two i listed as best in the battle
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Old 08-11-04, 11:00 PM   #14
cool one
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This was feedback posted for Pro-Rican

IP: C1DA C961

Dis battle was ok
too bad I cant vote yet but Il will get back to u when I can
 
Old 08-11-04, 11:03 PM   #15
Hitchcock
 
IP: B9AB 64CC

uppin for votes some got DQ cuz they werent explained holla at me
 
 


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