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08-10-04, 02:35 PM | #1 | |||||||
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New Solo Track From Triple_N
IP: C3CE 96D1
Ah'ight y'all this is something for the ladies to enjoy, and something for the fellas to take notes from.
Song title: Undeniable Dime Completely written and performed by Triple_N Here's the link http://www.soundclick.com/bands/8/triplenmusic.htm
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08-11-04, 08:07 PM | #3 | |||||||
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IP: C3CE 96D1
Uppin for some feedback on this>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
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08-12-04, 08:47 PM | #4 | |||||||
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IP: C3CE 96D1
Can I get some feedback this!!!!!!
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08-12-04, 08:55 PM | #5 | ||||
O.wning Y.ou D.aily
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IP: B3D0 6EC1
Too much music in the beginning....I was wondering when it was gonna start. Maybe you should say something at the beginning.....nice content though. Flow was nice. Didn't like the flow at the beginning of the second verse....kinda choppy. Chorus was nice. Vocals might have been a little loud, but it's better than too low. LOL.....enunciated well.....Cu Mit Ted.......keep dropping, this was nice
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08-12-04, 09:15 PM | #6 | |||||||
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IP: C3CE 96D1
Thanks for some feedback cuz this been getting slept on...but good criticisms I'll keep them in mind
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08-13-04, 09:29 PM | #7 | |||||||
New to RB
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IP: 4577 CD9A
yO i AINT NO CRITIC, BUT DOG SLOW THE FUCK DOWN , AND YOU BE ALRIGHT.
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08-13-04, 09:31 PM | #8 | |||||||
Ya mom massages my nuts
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IP: C3CE 96D1
Ok I ain't knocking your criticism but at least have it make sense man^^^^^^
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08-13-04, 10:41 PM | #9 | |||||
<<-Carpe Noctum->>
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IP: C1DA C961
lmao^yo, i think this is a dope song, you have nice flow, a good voice for this and you sounded nice along with the beat, you do great hooks and your style shines through as well, i really enjoyed the lyrics also, keep it up.............................1
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08-15-04, 03:28 PM | #10 | ||||||
FiVe SoUrCe CeO
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IP: C05C E297
I agree...too much dead air at the beginning
beat is okay AMP your vocals just 1 notch, the levels would be perfect voice is fine...doubles put in the right place flow was good lyrics were pretty decent not bad 1 |
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