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Old 08-10-04, 02:35 PM   #1
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Lightbulb New Solo Track From Triple_N

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Ah'ight y'all this is something for the ladies to enjoy, and something for the fellas to take notes from.

Song title: Undeniable Dime
Completely written and performed by Triple_N


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http://www.soundclick.com/bands/8/triplenmusic.htm
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Old 08-11-04, 08:07 PM   #3
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Uppin for some feedback on this>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
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Old 08-12-04, 08:47 PM   #4
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Can I get some feedback this!!!!!!
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Old 08-12-04, 08:55 PM   #5
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Too much music in the beginning....I was wondering when it was gonna start. Maybe you should say something at the beginning.....nice content though. Flow was nice. Didn't like the flow at the beginning of the second verse....kinda choppy. Chorus was nice. Vocals might have been a little loud, but it's better than too low. LOL.....enunciated well.....Cu Mit Ted.......keep dropping, this was nice
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Old 08-12-04, 09:15 PM   #6
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Thanks for some feedback cuz this been getting slept on...but good criticisms I'll keep them in mind
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Old 08-13-04, 09:29 PM   #7
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yO i AINT NO CRITIC, BUT DOG SLOW THE FUCK DOWN , AND YOU BE ALRIGHT.
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Old 08-13-04, 09:31 PM   #8
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Ok I ain't knocking your criticism but at least have it make sense man^^^^^^
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Old 08-13-04, 10:41 PM   #9
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lmao^yo, i think this is a dope song, you have nice flow, a good voice for this and you sounded nice along with the beat, you do great hooks and your style shines through as well, i really enjoyed the lyrics also, keep it up.............................1
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Old 08-15-04, 03:28 PM   #10
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I agree...too much dead air at the beginning


beat is okay

AMP your vocals just 1 notch, the levels would be perfect


voice is fine...doubles put in the right place

flow was good


lyrics were pretty decent


not bad


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