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08-12-04, 04:39 AM | #1 | |||||||
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symphony
IP: 71AE FF4B
miastro, wit nice flo, chorus diminuendo//
sing in pianissamo, til forted wit crescendo// my staff keeps tempo, strings play adagio// soft and legatto, the melodic picasso// voices make a glottal, rhythm syncapated// spittin ova the ballad I recently innovated// sounds elevated, virbrato wit a jazz swing// classical twist, intervals drift, doing my rap thang// fermatta held long as we near the vamp// inticipate the rest, holdin my conductin stance//
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08-12-04, 05:09 AM | #2 | |||||||
Vendetta the K.O. King
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IP: 78D8 9CA9
this was excellent. nice word usage - obviously you got more knowledge of a piano than I do. i suppose programming keyes in a beat machine are a little different than trying to match real tempo. lol. melodic picasso line was my fav easy. That should be someones nic. good looks on this one
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08-13-04, 03:05 AM | #3 | ||||||
Light Weight
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IP: 3158 0B2B
damn kidd feelin dat drop...had some crazy ass vocab...and good structure...flowed right...everything was there in dis....keep dat comin kidd...peace
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