Battle Rules:

10 lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

First to 5, 3-0 K0

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 08-18-04 at 06:39 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

Eclipsik has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-15-04 10:01 PM.

natedogg has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-15-04 11:38 PM.

what up dogg i will hit u with a log if u get to close so go do something for all of use go take a bath you smell like a letter hoe my bad you are one cuz you mom is a hoei gess it reands in the famly so wasyour dad a male hoe cuz i bet he was cuz the why u rap u act like you are a fag r something like that ass hole you aint no mc you are a mc what to be you act like a p ed of raper who never made it you r a ugly mother fucker you pop shouldve wore a rubber stop rhymin you are weastin my time and o lot of more peoples time to so go fuck one of your boyfrind in the ass and why u r at that make sure that you get him to pet it in your ass why he aint worein rubber like no outher you a mother fucker i am a fucker pimp and you need to take thatshit back wear you got it ok g fuck a id and that fack that you got hivs so bitch pleas get back down on your knees ok bitch so that is my rhym and dont mean to weast or time ass hole

Natedogg, "king of the hooks", sangin' and hums/
Try to mess with me and you gon' be hangin' from one/
The bang of the drum signifies my victory/
Beat you like husbands do an smoke you like hickory/
So natedogg the persona that you wanna be?/
First learn how to count, What The F*ck, "213"?/
Natedogg want his name back,or you pay on the rent/
Warren and Snoopy can't save you, stick to ya strengths/
Warp ya mind like abusive parents damage they kins/
Makin' no sense, you challenge but won't manage a win/

Voted For: Eclipsik

E takes this easy. Good structure, better punches. I liked the flow of the verse. Natedoggs verse just had me lost. Couldnt follow it at all. E takes this with harder punches, a better structure, and the upperhand in everythin else.

Vote-Eclipsik

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WTF can I get some votes so this can get closed and I can finally get on with other battles without getting banned?

Voted For: Eclipsik

Natedoog didnt have a chance cos of very poor structure and flow
Eclipsk gets my vote cos he actually structured and and his flow was iight and also he had better punches and iigiht personals

Final voet: E

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Voted For: Eclipsik

This one was kinda one-sided. I'm not hate voting because natedogg keeps dodging my challenges, but Eclipsik came with better structure and harder punches, i like how you was talkin' bout hangin' him form a hook, although it was kinda subtle. And E in case you didn't know, 213 is the area code of their group...
Vote - Eclipsik

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Voted For: Eclipsik

better punches, flow , STRUCTURE 4 sure cause his shit was off so bad I could barely read it, but u also used mettas and open & close were better so the v/ goes 2 Eclip...

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