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08-16-04, 03:37 PM | #1 | |||||||
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to face the lord
IP: 95EB 880F
i never really believed
doubting,answer the questions ,all was part of me til one day when the grim reaper took its toll and i saw the full force of the lord i remember dropping to my knees hands to the sky like angels standing beside me whispering softly i held my head low and i prayed for the lord to come to me me i've studied the bible and i've heard the many who rival it tell me something about this i need to understand its my quest for knowledge its the thirst with in but the power inside should over ride it my sick buisness sense told me never to trust always get paid, do things my way but something some day turned my opinions i saw what i saw and was suttley amused sometimes its lonely i'm gonna admit cant trust anyone or anything so at times i walk to church sit in the front row right in front of that cross i lower my head put my hands together and pray for the first time in a while its a conversation between just 2 me and him or her what ever i know that its a friend everything was established and i felt the light upon my soul brand new day for this moment i'll face the lord an eternity , a second chance respose was holy til kingdom come , my wait will not be in vain simply face the lord Last edited by TURBAN : 08-17-04 at 02:27 AM. |
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08-16-04, 09:37 PM | #2 | |||||||
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IP: 95EB 880F
hey can i get some feed back? anyone , hit me up wit ur link and i wll check it out
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08-16-04, 09:57 PM | #3 | |||
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IP: F302 F64E
ya i was feelin most of it, deep shit man
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08-17-04, 02:19 AM | #4 | |||||||
Banned: Cheating
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IP: 95EB 880F
thanks its funny what you cant believe in and how it messes wit ur head then one day after something huge happens it turns it all around , everything your visions your priorities what matters in life thats sorta what it is that turning point
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08-17-04, 02:33 AM | #5 | ||||||
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IP: F68E 94A8
feelin dat drop kidd...had alot of emotion put into it...really feelin it...good structure and vocab...really feelin dat 4th part...like how it all flowed and da meanin 2 it...keep it comin kidd peace
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08-17-04, 01:48 PM | #6 | |||||||
Banned: Cheating
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IP: 95EB 880F
i changed some shit in it so yea
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08-17-04, 06:31 PM | #7 | ||||
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IP: F302 F64E
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ya no doubt, i experienced that shit awhile ago, turns ur whole perspective on life around dawg we gotta collabo sometime, i like ur shit respect |
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08-18-04, 01:55 AM | #8 | |||||||
Banned: Cheating
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IP: 95EB 880F
thanks man anytime you wanna jus holla , you pop the idea and i'll follow
much respect o yea watch out for this post i'm doin with mistah tate it will be off the chain jus plain insane like on a whole other level |
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08-19-04, 12:00 AM | #9 | |||||||
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IP: 685E CA12
Reminds me of a piece I once wrote, maybe I'll post it soon. Anyway, a lot of emotion in this. Kind of makes you think about the way you think about things, huh? Nice flow, aswell. I liked this. A lot. Keep droppin stuff like this, you're good at writing.
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08-19-04, 12:54 PM | #10 | |||||||
Banned: Cheating
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IP: 95EB 880F
hey u in a crew? pm me if you want to join my crew "MR.FUNKYPANTS"
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