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Old 08-16-04, 03:37 PM   #1
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to face the lord

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i never really believed
doubting,answer the questions ,all was part of me
til one day when the grim reaper took its toll
and i saw the full force of the lord
i remember dropping to my knees

hands to the sky
like angels standing beside me whispering softly
i held my head low
and i prayed for the lord to come to me

me i've studied the bible
and i've heard the many who rival it
tell me something about this
i need to understand
its my quest for knowledge
its the thirst with in

but the power inside should over ride it
my sick buisness sense told me never to trust
always get paid, do things my way
but something some day turned my opinions
i saw what i saw and was suttley amused

sometimes its lonely i'm gonna admit
cant trust anyone or anything
so at times i walk to church
sit in the front row
right in front of that cross
i lower my head
put my hands together
and pray
for the first time in a while
its a conversation between just 2
me and him or her what ever i know that its a friend
everything was established
and i felt the light upon my soul
brand new day


for this moment i'll face the lord
an eternity , a second chance
respose was holy
til kingdom come ,
my wait will not be in vain
simply face the lord

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Old 08-16-04, 09:37 PM   #2
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hey can i get some feed back? anyone , hit me up wit ur link and i wll check it out
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Old 08-16-04, 09:57 PM   #3
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ya i was feelin most of it, deep shit man
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Old 08-17-04, 02:19 AM   #4
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thanks its funny what you cant believe in and how it messes wit ur head then one day after something huge happens it turns it all around , everything your visions your priorities what matters in life thats sorta what it is that turning point
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Old 08-17-04, 02:33 AM   #5
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feelin dat drop kidd...had alot of emotion put into it...really feelin it...good structure and vocab...really feelin dat 4th part...like how it all flowed and da meanin 2 it...keep it comin kidd peace
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Old 08-17-04, 01:48 PM   #6
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i changed some shit in it so yea
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Old 08-17-04, 06:31 PM   #7
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thanks its funny what you cant believe in and how it messes wit ur head then one day after something huge happens it turns it all around , everything your visions your priorities what matters in life thats sorta what it is that turning point


ya no doubt, i experienced that shit awhile ago, turns ur whole perspective on life around
dawg we gotta collabo sometime, i like ur shit
respect
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Old 08-18-04, 01:55 AM   #8
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thanks man anytime you wanna jus holla , you pop the idea and i'll follow

much respect

o yea watch out for this post i'm doin with mistah tate it will be off the chain jus plain insane like on a whole other level
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Old 08-19-04, 12:00 AM   #9
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Reminds me of a piece I once wrote, maybe I'll post it soon. Anyway, a lot of emotion in this. Kind of makes you think about the way you think about things, huh? Nice flow, aswell. I liked this. A lot. Keep droppin stuff like this, you're good at writing.
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Old 08-19-04, 12:54 PM   #10
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hey u in a crew? pm me if you want to join my crew "MR.FUNKYPANTS"
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