[[Intro]]
*Phone Rings Four Times*
Answering Machine: "Ayo This Is Dev, I'm Not In Right Now So Leave Some... Peace."
Shawnise: "Hey Devon, It's Shawnise From That Party Awhile Back. Well I Know Things Got Alittle Crazy That Night And Well,"
*Girl Starts Crying*
Shawnise: "I'm, I'm, Oh My God I Cant Even Say It. I'm Sorry Bye."
*Nearly Hangs Up The Phone Then Picks It Up Again*
Shawnise: "You Know, This Has Got To Be Said...I'm Pregnant, And I Need Help Because There Is No Way In Hell I Can Aford This On My Own. So You Need To Call Me As Soon As You Get This."
*Phone Hangs Up*

*Phone Rings Four Times*
Answering Machine: "Ayo This Is Dev, I'm Not In Right Now So Leave Some... Peace."
*Voice Seams Filled With Anger*
Shawnise: "Mother Fucker, Atleast You Could Call Me. My Life Is Hell Right Now And Your Sorry Ass Can't Even Get Back To Me?!?! You Know What, Fuck You Just Send Me A Check."
*Phone Hangs Up*

[[Hook]]
So many questions tryna race with your train of thought
Lost under tracks of angst and confusion pushing against your pacients
For so many ages has man copped out on his chance to support greatness
But on the other hand how could I ever aford those payments?
So undisided again, I rest and contemplate my options
Raise my baby or put the next of my generation to coffin

[[Verse One: Lethal Lunatic]]
Listen to me dawg your already known as a serial killer
You can't afford child support so why don't you kill her
It's just an unfortunate mistake that now you can't afford
Kill the bitch wit overdose pills or cut out her vocal cords ?
Cuz you know there's only one thing you can't have is...
Kids, livin in ya fuckin business...you know can't live this
No gory, blood, beatin needed no bruises should be of
I know it wasn't your fault man you just ended up fallin in love
You know life aint easy so now is the time you have to stop it
If u get locked up and end behind bars you have to drop it
Two kills in the price of one is a priceless homicide
I know it'll hurt inside, but later on you'll gain some pride
Look around you man there's nothing else you can do
Thoughts of misery you're goin through, JUST LOOK AT YOU!!!
From a killer to a Mr. Nice Guy wat the hell is wrong wit you
I already told you, KILL HER!!! like the rest you did to
Just imagine the day it comes out from her womb
And it'll come out to not be ya son den ya'll ask whom...
Den you'll remember you had the chance to end it all
But now it looks like your the pussy and don't have the balls
Cuz now your the so called bitch ready to have the son
So breathe in and breathe out KILL HER!!! till she's out and done
As your closest friend do wat I'm tellin you please
Take my advice and you'll end up wit all the amount of cheese
To fullfil your emotion and love you lost that you'll soon forget
Don't fall on me, stop think on the day that you and you girl met
So listen clearly I'm doin this for your own good kid
Don't think about it, trust me this isn't stupid, just do it
Dehydrate, clear out all her body fluid, and leave her clueless
Don't mess up and trust me kid...YOU HAVE TO DO THIS!!!

[[Chorus]]
Never be able to support this notion
Back and forth sways this source of emotion
Spoken my thoughts? Never could I
Cuz it's so hard to decide when It's a life That could die
All on the line, tite roping on my last thread
Breaking, fraying from logic, capable of god knows what acts next

[[Verse Two: Fluidmoon]]
Stop!!! i don't want to hear you anymore, i can't listen
Voices screaming in my head,as confusion sets in again
Indecision fills my brain as i splash cold water over my face
I stop to stare as the reflections in the mirror change shape
My eyes have turned black, my sullen heart to hardened stone
This pressure burning like fire inside, i must leave my home
"Kill them both,just do it fool","Your wasting precious time!!
This indecisive pain pierces as i think of this crime,killing me inside
I need to breathe, but this festering insanity keeps mocking me
I should have never fucked her,let alone touch her,but its my fault
Maybe i should own up to this,have the child,besides i'm the boss
Need to figure this out,but my head is spinning circles, i need help soon
But my blood is cold,i've crossed over the darkside,i'm evil, now i'm doomed...

[[Chorus]]
Never be able to support this notion
Back and forth sways this source of emotion
Spoken my thoughts? Never could I
Cuz it's so hard to decide when It's a life That could die
All on the line, tite roping on my last thread
Breaking, fraying from logic, capable of god knows what acts next

[[Verse Three: Artafact Wordz]]
Don't Kill The Girl She Gonna Have Kid That'll Look Like Just Like You
Would You Like It If You Was Gonna Get Hit With A Left And Right Bruise
Kid Gonna View You As His Idol,Play Sports,Catch Groundballs
What He'z Telling You Ain't Right Dude,Ya Actions Can Be Ya Downfall
That Devil Ain't Ya Closest Friend,He Infectin Ya Souls And Internals
Ya Life Is Close To End,Kill Her,Ya Gonna Go To A Hole That'z Infernal
Picture It You And Ya Child Shootin Free Throws On Tha Block
Calm Down My Man This Ain't The Plan,You Act Like She Don't Got A Job
She'll Help You Pay For The Kid,Or You Deliver Child Support In The Mail
Listen To Him You'll Be Eatin Food In Jail,Callin Her To Help Post Bail
You Won't Gain Pride From Beatin This Chick,You Helped Make It
How Would You Feel If You Was A Kid And Had Ya Health Taken?

[[Outro]]
Devon: "My God, What Have I Done? I Can't Aford This Child But I Can't Run From My Responsabilities As A Man"
*Begins To Cry*
Devon: "There Is Only One Thing I Can Do Now. Please, God Forgive Me."
*Mom Knocks On The Door*
Mom: "Honey Dinner Is Ready... Devon? Are You Ok In There"
*Mom Opens The Door In Panic*
Mom: "OH MY GOD!..."
*Mother Holding Her Son Weaping Histarically*
Mom: Nooo, No No Nooooo... My Baby."

OMG GOD.

A.I is Dohpe. I have to say this was long but it was worth it to read. All ya'll came really nice on this am proud of havin this dope topicals in the crew.

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holy shit this is BLAZING HOTTT.................great job all of you.....word,....uppin..1

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"QUOD ME NUTRIT, ME DESTRUIT--AUT VINCERE AUT MORI"

O Y D

*FluidMusic*


*Poetic Scriptures Moderator*

this was a dope peice imagery was great flow could be improved in a few places i think
it was a great peice 8.5/10
work on your spelling lol

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this was preety cool, decent flow decent enough creativeness i think lethal luntic really lacked creativeness but it was decent still, fluid moon verse was short but not bad... artifact i thought it was a good ending the switch up or the odd one other the other 2 who is thinking to kill the BABY WHICH I WOULDNT SINCE I HAVE A 3 year old girl.... just take it as it coem and learn not to let it happen again u feel me.....

but decent drop i liked it

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man that is ill off the chain , yea long read but def worth it , shit , its intense and you can play the situation in your head as it goes which is bomb that is art pure art nothing less than art a 10 in my book nice keep me posted if you put up new shit

appreciate the feedback...............................1

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"QUOD ME NUTRIT, ME DESTRUIT--AUT VINCERE AUT MORI"

O Y D

*FluidMusic*


*Poetic Scriptures Moderator*

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damn...all yall spit fire...feeling the story...great imaginary...good shit....keep droppin and holla at me!! 1

This was hott shit.Great creativitie,great rhymes,great hook,great everything.Open Mic of the month in my opinion.Keep up the good work.

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The Definition. period.

GREAT DROP....wow ya'll r really good...i have much respect

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So what chicks can rap too/
you just won't battle me cause i can beat u/

Respect List:
AKA (down, and keepin it real)
KoObOo (A true friend wouldn't be the right words)
The Disciple (mmmm Tight probbly wouldn't be the word) lol
Tony Montana (thiz my main boi for rapping)
Ciara Myst (hey if u cant beat em', join em')
phatom (he jus got skill)
LivenLegend ( thiz my friend for life)
fluidmoon (she got ova half ya'll beat)

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