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Old 08-22-04, 02:39 AM   #1
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Thumbs up This is a songwriters song

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This is a solo track by Triple_N...completely written and performed by me(Triple_N)

Song title is: Inner Demons

Ah'ight here is the link

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/8/triplenmusic.htm
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Old 08-22-04, 03:07 AM   #2
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beat is okay...proper for this type of flow


quality was above average...not bad...could be crisper


lyrics were well written...and flow was on for most of the track

voice and emotion were appropriate


chorus was fitting


not bad...i liked it



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Old 08-22-04, 03:43 AM   #3
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triple you realy amazed me on this one i listined to some of your other stuff and all of it is pretty damn good but this one was realy good nice beat nice chorus no cracking in the voice great pauses with the beat during some part of the flow which added to the lyrics that was real good im burnin it on a cd formyself i give that a 11 out of 10 keep up the good work
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Old 08-22-04, 05:09 AM   #4
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nigga this was pretty tight. the first and second verses were cool but the last verse was particulary good cuz u followed the story line smoothly and didnt seem to force the rhymes in. the hook does need to be different though.....8.5/10
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Old 08-22-04, 08:05 PM   #5
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Nice content......I liked this one. Lyrics were nice and I even liked the chorus. Quality was nice. Nothing much to say about this shit but DAMN......nice drop
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Old 08-23-04, 04:42 PM   #6
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Old 08-23-04, 06:55 PM   #7
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Straight Feelin this-- jus stop battlin and start makin albums kikko- You tell an iight story here, feelin the beat, delivery was correct- I especially liked your intro-- that shit was a fire analogy you broke down-- I might have to sample that shit .... 1
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Old 08-23-04, 08:25 PM   #8
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wow, triple, nice intro, i liked your flow on this track and the lyrics, this sounded very professional and your voice had great quality, word,^^^^you should make an album, good shit man.............................1
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Old 08-24-04, 01:45 AM   #9
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Old 08-25-04, 10:53 AM   #10
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Old 08-25-04, 01:24 PM   #11
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amazing dawg...this shit is deep...9/10...lookin forward to hearin some more of ya shit
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Old 08-27-04, 11:19 PM   #12
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Old 09-08-04, 08:27 PM   #13
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Yeah i'm agree with everybody that shit was HOT!!! man, i listened to ur other tracks, and u'r really tight man. Stay Up.
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