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08-24-04, 10:47 PM
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Kelis...
IP: 47DB 51BB
At first i thought she was tryin to trick me..
Wen she sed her single wasnt called lick me.. No wonda wen i went dwn her feet started to kick me.. Her boyfriend nas a thief so gta be careful he dnt nick me, I then asked kelis for a taste of her chocolate milkshake... She slapped me in the face and sprayed me with the mace... Bt thank god i was prepared with some goggles...jus in case.... Now im findin myself with a restrainin orda and pleadin on rikki lake... I thought to myself if i was bein a bit too hasty... Bt c'mon man with an album like hers she gta be tasty.. I kno that the journey to her heart gna be hard... But y'all kno her milkshake brings all the boys to the yard.. No wonda pharrel tryin to 'protect her heart'.... Him, me or nas now she gta take her pik... Wnt be pharrel coz me and nas would do it in public... Jst 4 jokes y'all lol  =me and kelis |
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08-25-04, 02:01 PM
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uppin
IP: 47DB 51BB
uppin 4 feeback prefer positive feedbak
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08-25-04, 02:02 PM
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IP: 07E0 A9F2
I love kelis too.........
We shouda collabed = ) IT was ok... some word's needed two sylable rhymin..... .....Hmm..... Vocab could have been better.... Flow needed some work.. & you needed a few multi's... 5/10 - half.
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