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6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 09-04-04 at 06:55 AM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

PlaTinuM_ has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-04-04 06:27 AM.

konfuzed has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-04-04 06:27 AM.

you wanna go first, or do you want me to spit first or what?

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juz spit now ima do ma shyt now too....


~+.::!PopCoRn plaYaZ!::.+~

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My Battlez
me vs System Crasher

http://community.rapverse.com/showbattlethread.php?t=147497 Me Vs ProVerse

You're gettin served like Omarion
By the rhymes I carry, son.
You get confused by Konfuzed:
Leave ya "dumber" than "Harry Dunn" (Dumb And Dumber)

Your wack game flows like rainbows,
But you know that my flame throws.
Damn, come on dawg,
Everyone that's sane knows:

Just like fourteen days,
Your rhymes are just "two week",
Cause you rap like a million others,
Are you even tryin' to be unique?

If you'd go try out for Fox,
Audition at American Idol,
Voters would terrorize you
Like they was members from Al-Qaeda,

Cause your verses are "wrecks",
Not to mention, fuckin' "plain";
I think you bit this shit
From stuff my infant son been sayin'.

I'm a human, not a game,
So why you gotta keep playin' me?
One of our differences:
People feel what I'M sayin, G.

Ima diss u like u fucked Adam-Sandler
You da h0e i see u one of dat best Dick-Handler

Ill take a cloth n shove it down a throat so u cant speak
ill raise up da numberz on ur losing weekly streak

your one of dem gay mu fuckerz tryina pick up guyz
you wearin gurlz shyt like your tryin to be da master of disgise

ill grad ma chain saw n cut u through ur heart
cuz u know i merked you from tha start

uppin for votes...

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Uppin for votez!!! UPPIN FOR VOTEz!!!!


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My Battlez
me vs System Crasher

http://community.rapverse.com/showbattlethread.php?t=147497 Me Vs ProVerse

uppin for votes...

it's in the bag, playaz...

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I stay strapped like carseats.

uppin for voooooooooooooooootes......

vote on this shit, y'all... this ain't the time to be sleepin... even if it is 8 a.m.

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Voted For: konfuzed

both verses were structured well and flowed well......this was a really hard battle to vote on because all the categories are even...but i have to pick a winner.....neither verse had ne metaphores, or multies......konfuzed has a more creative and unique style compared to platinum......platinum had some played lines in his verse.....and konfuzed cam with better punches then platinum so my vote goes to konfuzed for comin stronger then platinum........
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definitely uppin the post for some votes... it's worth it, i hope...

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Upppppiiinnnn Ffffoooorrrrr Vvvvvooooottttteeeezzzz!!!!!

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My Battlez
me vs System Crasher

http://community.rapverse.com/showbattlethread.php?t=147497 Me Vs ProVerse