Yo ima free agent yet again....the thing you need to know about me is that i retired from battlin but if you want a person that is one of the best poeticly...then you found him...heres a lil piece i put togeather not to long ago...its called Song Cry....


As you know the title of this is off Jay-Z the blueprint...i was listenin to it and some deep shit just hit me........so if you can put this to the Song Cry beat.....Check it........

Yo Aunt-T im so sorry i couldent be there when you passed,
but mom wanted me to go,
how could i tell her no,
things were goin by so fast,
my emotions couldent last,
but now that i look back,
i wouldent change that,
what you did for me was great,
you bein my aunt had to be fate,
you knew me better than i ever knew myself and upped my love rate,
and i dont know why it had to happen,
i guess that why i really started rappin,
when we would visit that gap in my life closed,
and all that bad stuff between me and my dad froze,
it was like an alternate place to go,
i regret that i couldent see you all that much though,
and i would be lyinif i said things were alright cause there not,
i feel like im in the wrong spot,
i want to change my life and my name,
and i know if you were here you would tell me to stay the same.....I Love You Aunt-T.......
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...Hook-I cant see em comin down my eyes,
so i gotta make the song cry.......Etc......
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Now Grandaddy I know you loved me the same,
but when we stoped talking man that was lame,
and i remember back when,
me and April were kids,
you would give us things,
but you died so spread ya wings,
and fly high for me,
but not only for me but for the whole family,
and now that your gone,
i find it hard to write a love song,
and now that your in heven lookin down,
i can finially smile,
cause i know you loved me all the while,
and if the last thing you give me is your will,
ima use it on a demo to express my skill,
and as the tears fall down my eyes,
as the days pass by,
i think of all the good times we had as i cry......
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.Hook-i cant see em comin down my eyes,
so i gotta make the song cry........Etc....
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now mamai know you got alot of things on ya mind,
and its ok to cry,
you just gotta let it out sometimes,
and thats what i do wit my rhymes,
you lost ya dad and sister in two months,
and you know im here if you ever need some hugs,
but ya gotta take it day by day,
and think of all the funnie things Aunt-T used to say,
cause thats the good way,
and some day soon things are gonna change,
im gonna make you proud ma just you wait,
and im sorry if i ever did you bad,
but lets stick to the good and get some memories to have,
this song is for anybody who feels my pain,
through these rhymes i say,
cause all of us are gonna make it someday,
in one way or another,
i have confidence in yall cause yall me sistas and brothas....I Love You Mama....
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.Hook-i cant see em comin down my eyes,
so i gotta make the song cry........Etc.......Peayce....holla if you like what you see and if you dont then dont reply....

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