i hate it when people put me down were sposed to stick together
keep rhyming doing what we do, staying friends for ever and ever
since i started rapping ive been hated, im trying to make a living
telling me im shit, so i ask for help, but i see know chance of giving
i'm kina ticked off now cos all you people ever do is laugh in my face
saying imma fool for rapping hating on me saying imma disgrace
i'm gonna prove to you i can rap so you praise me and respect me
maybe feed of me, now you think i'm good so you see it in me
ive got the skillz i just cant find the words to put in my lines
so i freestyles, it a fits together its like im stepping on mines
everytime i walk something bad happens everytime on every line
i take time to think of just one word that could fit in my rhymes
prove to me that i cant rap ive written this in the space of 10 minuts
i just find it hard to battle punches are hard to find 10 lines and then it's
bang! plustwo loses 5-0 someday ill prove myself and strike you by suprise
so you will never dispise ill be respected and then you will realise
that plustwo will beat you easily, using complexed lines, he started off shit
give me sometime to get to the top then no one can touch me not even a bit.

yo stop sleeping n tell me what ya think bout it... have i improved or npt u think im good??

you need bad elavations man no ofense but you do!

yo need practice kid........this stuff wasnt hot or fiyao or anything........more like Ice.......if your sayin fuck you or dissing haters have at least decent punches....

pz

2.5/10

-BC

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