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Old 09-24-04, 03:57 PM   #1
Scenario
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Hypnotist Diss

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faggot wanna say i make rap look bad please nigga, lol
if u good then why u hide ya record to
don't think cause u in mindz kollide i ain't gonna come after u
i don't care who backs u up, i'm still gonna merk u

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u a lil soft nigga ya sweet like hershey
only time he spits like me is when i piss in his mouth cause this dyke's thirsty
u a dick rider u probably saw that picture of her ass circulating around *
kid u can "wave" goodbye to any chance of beating me cause i'll leave ya brain surfing around (yea)
faggot u couldn't spit intelligent if our "mindz kollide"d
i'm a lyrical monster, u here a ticking noise in ya head cause i put a bomb inside it
so let's have a moment of silence for the artist formally known as hypnotist
bitch pre-write all his verses, ran out of room on the front so he turns it over in other words flips the script
i don't endorse commercials but the way i'm popping this nigga u would think he's a pringles chip
u a faggot so that's why ya ass is single bitch
before u posts on my battles again get ya posts count up
cause my punches go straight to ya brain like white powder
u couldn't come sick if u was dirty for 3 weeks and didn't take a shower
the only way to top this is to have another member of ya group write for ya
after i'm done you'll be the artist who was once the hypnotist but now known as toya
bitch u couldn't come hard if u was earl campbell's son playing for the houston oilers





*there's a pic of yvonne's ass that's going around

(this is just a quick diss, i'll come back harder when i don't have other situations that need attention)
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Old 09-24-04, 04:00 PM   #2
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pretty dope man the best ive seen from you, but still needs work of coarse i need work to so dont get it the wrong way but i liked it pretty dope lol 7.3/10 i like it for a newb check out my open mic peer pressure aight
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Old 09-24-04, 04:31 PM   #3
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hey that was definately hot...i liked the "mindz collided"-----"bomb inside it" line the best...but anyway nice dis...1
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Old 09-24-04, 04:46 PM   #4
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thanks for the feedback but i'm upping for more feedback
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