how dare you come in my thread saying my lyrics are shit,
when you were the one who got bullied over your 6 line bit,
ill shit on you, now watch me show how shit you really are,
heres a lesson, it's called syllables, try to match up ya bars,
it flows better, but bitches like you are never gonna elevate,
thinkin your the shit it's best you just sign off and degenerate,
you say you never try, it's cos you always get ripped apart,
get the fuck off this site and stick to your graphical art,
ill give you "bling bling" when i show off your bank account,
he payed for votes, he still lost now he asks for a recount,
just face it you lack just about everything you'll ever need,
including the knife that i used to cut you open and bleed,
you had no punches, and your never gonna get them,
put out another diss to me them ill cut through your brain stem,
tellin shotta he doesn't know shit, cos he said you need to learn,
if i were you i'd burn your lines, thats the best advise you ever earned.

iight ma nigga good shyt nigga u jus came out wit anger n ripped dat shyt keep writin 1

uppin for feedback

this thread needs feedback gimmi some leave a link n ill repay the favour

flow was nice, delivery has aight punches could have been harder although i was diggin the finisher.
'if i were you i'd burn your lines, thats the best advise you ever earned'
rating this a 3.5/5

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Bored so im Rapping on the internet Just for Spite....
Rhyme dictionary rappers please battle me with your writerns

u kno what this reminds me of???? How I used to diss cats, I used to flow with that anger at people, but lately I been on some prophet stuff so I been a lil more chill, but I liked it, comin from that type of flowin I can respect that so keep it comin I was feelin it dawg. 7.5/10

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