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Old 09-25-04, 08:04 PM   #1
Kawn Flixx
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ok i'm sick of people being wack lol

heres some tips and some catogories
to help some people who are lyrically chalenge

(1)you must have personals!!!! why?


*signals that it isn't a prewrite

*makes punches alot more wittier

*if you're nt using personals
you have no material,and sooner
or later you will run out of PL's and will bite

example of a personal

you're denied in the pro's,wth restricted entry
Its explains your sig because you're GREEN with envy

^see my sig is green--THAT's a personal


(2)keep it mature


*no momma or girlfriend disses please

*no sex jokes unless its relevant with there name

(3)Threats aren't a Punch

*no gun rap here,even if you a real G
it shows no perpose here,this is not 8mile homie

*saying ur gonna kill somebody is also stupid

(4)BE WITTY!!!!

*wordplay and flow counts DEEPLY to a good verse

(5)legiblility

*jus means structure it right


(6)Metas:

*wordplay
(compare your opponet
to somethin relevant to there name)

(7)Multis(multiple rhymes in one sentence)
*keeps the voter ammused
and sounds better

(8)vocabulary

*don't be so predictable with ur words
*better voacb leads to better skills in the long run




^I will edit this post a bit later
cuz I just got a PM....

I would like for the mods to put this in tutorals
cuz I couldn't do it myself.....the current tutorals
are no help

peace
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Old 09-25-04, 08:18 PM   #2
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^pm strobe with a link to ya tutorial... worked for me.
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Old 09-25-04, 08:20 PM   #3
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u forgot the multies, although im not dat good at dem, but using them is definetly is a bonus
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Old 09-25-04, 08:20 PM   #4
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^^ thats word!!!
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Old 09-25-04, 10:43 PM   #5
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i should merk you for making this thread lol
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Old 09-27-04, 01:06 AM   #6
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man all of that is in the tutorials, but all these newbs who think they are all that, come in and think they are the shit and drop the most pathetic verse, I RECOMEND TUTORIALS!!! they help
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Old 09-27-04, 01:08 AM   #7
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hahahah thx for da tips i guess but i dint use 'em o well its al good
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Old 09-28-04, 10:10 AM   #8
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^^ Lmao I Think You Should Ha Ha
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personally i think all jarule's songs are da bomb

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Old 09-28-04, 10:11 AM   #9
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Old 09-28-04, 01:59 PM   #10
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do do do...i think you should of been a vet or middleweight to try
to teach us anything at all kiddo and

NOTE. I'm the personal & Witty God
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Old 09-28-04, 03:19 PM   #11
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gimme a personal Right now.

aka when you read this
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