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GoD LiKe
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In a Box {On The Inside}
IP: E267 1347
Through life's complications i think of all the nonsense i've been through
Only consolation prizes because my conscience has issues All combinations of lies are told to me and my accomplises from you Critical observations speak limitations and constant abuse Why reminise on past love stories that gave me pain and confusion Every time my heart feels something, the mind says it's an illusion To many people's amusement I slip, fall, and struggle to my feet Either friends, foes, or family can bring reminders of past defeats I'm no longer complete, losing each and every warm feeling inside Pretending that i'm happy but could really care less if i die Keep confessions disguised knowing soon that my heart will dissenigrate All suggestions denied because to me i have a clearer fate Hear my ventalations through visual aids like expressions on my face I fear my hesitations of physical pain, it is myself i have disgraced This missplaced sanity and hidden feelings complete the entire package of this humorless time Bringing forth damaging healings of bleeding are the actions of this Persons mind Will i find or be found in the near future's trials and tribulations? Will i save or be saved in the near future's long depressing situations? Your visitations are unwanted, when you come it's rain in my eyes Don't they understand that my face doesn't get wet when i cry? Being blind and not seeing are two completely different things And on the inside i don't let one single person see the pain that with in
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IP: 3240 794D
beautiful, thats all i gotta say, i feel this poem, the emotion is so true, well done once again, the best lines"why remionisce about past love stories that gave me pain and confusion", "every time my heart feels something, my mind says its an illusion", dope, and your closing 3 bars....nice shit
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GoD LiKe
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IP: 3D5A F2F5
Thanks Girl
when you gonna dropp some new stuff? You always drop nice feedback, Peace and Good Lookin
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IP: 9253 500F
wow...thats really good..it was long but kept me interested u used big words n it was deep n it's a lot how i feel i really like it keep it up lata playa
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