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10-01-04, 08:34 PM
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Hell yeah
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Kid's Dream
IP: F0CB 13B0
I Only Speaking For Me,Id Be Lucky To Be A Celebrity,But Its Only A Kid Dreams,Its My Biggist Fantasy,Can X-Spitty Enter The Rap Industry?I Dont Think So Hes Not Enough Lyricly Conformist By His Ennemys,Just Be Pacient,Thats The Number Trick To be Famous,Look At My Anus,I Aint Playing Im Serious,I Feel Like Im Living In A Circus,On Stage Everybody Looks At Me,Its Normal To Be Nervous,Try To Activate The Croud With A Bouncy Chorus,I Hate People Always Putting Me Down Like A Clown,Saying That Im Funny And To Much Underground,I Wanna Say Something But Aint Coming Out Of My Mouth,Aint No Sound,Wonder What Happens And Look Around,I Wake Up Suddently It Was Only A Dream,Not A Regular Dream...But A Kid's Dream...
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10-01-04, 08:47 PM
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#2
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Hell yeah
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IP: F0CB 13B0
Just Need Some Feedback Please!
''X-Spitty'' |
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10-01-04, 10:49 PM
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#3
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Hell yeah
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IP: F0CB 13B0
Come on People!...Only Need Feedback!!!
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10-02-04, 12:53 PM
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#4
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Hell yeah
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IP: F0CB 13B0
OKay its my last time asking....FEEDBACK!!!
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10-02-04, 03:51 PM
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#5
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23-7, 16 Knockouts
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IP: 28AD 5545
i think dis is how i use to rap long time ago, but i elevated now, but its more of a battle rap dan a story. however i think its good verse dawg
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10-02-04, 03:53 PM
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23-7, 16 Knockouts
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IP: 28AD 5545
but u did good. uppin on dis shit^^^^^^ don sleep on it
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10-02-04, 05:49 PM
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#7
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New to RB
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IP: BAAD 84F0
yea mi liked yo shit dawg good piece hit mine up, "cruelty" thx dawg!
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10-02-04, 06:53 PM
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#8
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Hell yeah
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IP: F0CB 13B0
more feedback people!
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10-02-04, 07:14 PM
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who wants a hug????
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IP: 158D 3E12
mayn i wasnt feelin it, you had random shit all over hte place to make it sound liek you had multis, you need to elevate, but oyur alrgiht for only have 23 posts and never battlin
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10-03-04, 09:39 AM
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#10
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Hell yeah
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IP: F0CB 13B0
one more persone please
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10-03-04, 09:44 AM
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#11
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E-Style, Bitch.
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IP: 24A3 0EF0
sorry playa
i didnt like it... it wsnt creative an you just seemed like u didnt put any thought into alotta the rhymes.............. no hate homeboy, just keep droppin rhymes an steppin ya game up
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10-03-04, 10:03 PM
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Hell yeah
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IP: F0CB 13B0
its all good thanks to all ya people..ill work on it
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