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10-07-04, 06:25 AM | #1 | ||||||
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Fuck The Hook
IP: D405 DABD
Verse 1
I dont wanna blow up thru out every era that ive been here So far the underground circue has been fair The home of hip-hop can you say you've been there? If homes where the heart is then hip-hop lives right here We've from UK and 2 you that might seem rare Im stepping up now to make sure we seem clear In every council estate we've got pure talent But no-one don't care cuz we've seen as a challenge I surpose we've never be the balance that your looking You wanna dilute the realness of finger hooking Most A 'N' R cats i've met were all shooking Im lost for words if they don't bring a check book in Im living in a place where you cud get your life tookin For half stepping by kids that'll blast wepions Pull up at the lights there have you out in half seconds Thinking ruff hang around if your heart recons Don't have to look for trouble-trouble it a find ya Don't turn around it will be right behind ya And September the 11th will remind ya Nobody ain't to major no miner if your brocking the streets Or in a brand new recliner grab your dicks n girls grab your vaginas Pay the pound 2 provide the punch-liner Might look young but im a real old timer Been around ever since the days i could be down You can check my resionay the evidence can be found For ever been blessing my friends with sounds Before they had the lino for spinning on the ground Since then shits changed mad shits gone down But we've still getting down to this same old sound Its hip-hop its good shit for rocking the crowd Where there ain't no space for mistakes allowed I feel pround if im leaveing crowds crying for more This year im really thinking bout trying to tour Is hip-hop worth dieing for? If your lifes on the line then your only crime is being poor This time around i feel i want more I wanna see my sons future set sacure Without having to go out and start breaking the law Cuz im sick of sitting in the flat shotting the draw Im sick of watching everday come and go by Telling titch and fatboy hold your head high Ive seen others go watching there mothers cry Thinking why did my boy have to die? Still we've try as others might choose to get high But we must uprise thrue to get by It dont take 2-much to figure out the facts Bout whos bringing in all the coke n the crack This week my girl got her throat slashed in the flats By some cats looking for cash 4 there crack And we've the kids whos left faceing the facts Now youths are looking mobiles to match there straps Its fashion everybodys ready for the action Ready for the mashing and thugging it with a passion Only takes 2 egos to start clashing bullets start flying n the blood start splashing Social wages really climaxing everyday i see it getting worst by a fraction Droughts for the weed but none of that crack ting Cuz nobody round here is going to be relaxing Cuz this ain't a white or black thing Its if your living int he council flats on a brack ting Cuz they've got us on a lab rat thing So im just gonna keep a-rapping You lot keep your necks snapping n fuck the hook WHAT? fuck the hook |
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10-07-04, 07:14 AM | #2 | ||||||
Whys That?
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IP: 5285 DC82
Nice!! This has a good flow to it. There are a few stretched line's which did mess it a bit. but nothing to serious. Your rhyme's are decent but do come thru a little bit weak in a few place's. Try using more multi's. This will raise the level of your peice and make it more complex.
nice drop. keep them coming....pz |
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10-08-04, 05:43 AM | #3 | ||||||
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IP: D405 DABD
uppin this shit
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