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10-07-04, 07:32 AM | #1 | |||||
~SAINT SINNER~
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"YOUTHanasia"
IP: 88C4 C811
((:::ROUGH DRAFT:::ROUGH DRAFT:::ROUGH DRAFT:::ROUGH DRAFT::)
(euthanasia- noun. the act or practice of putting to death a person suffering from an incurable disease; also called a mercy killing.) ...is a visit to heaven worth a trip to hell??? ...is peace worth bloodshed??? ...will we experience freedom.......or just free-dumb??? (hook x2- sung by children) "due to the planets corruption... we are weapons of mass destruction... tick, tick, ticking away... tick, tick, ticking away, y'all just diggin' the graves... pay ransoms for our minds abductions... then resume our damage production... give, give, give us our brains... forbidden whats written, but never living as slaves..." (verse) "due 2 the planets corruption, i function as a weapon of mass destruction... 2 used to seein' dorment productions, fuck em, now its multi attack eruptions raised on brash presumptions, but deduct untrue facts like math reductions blind sight luncheons, force fed assumptions tungin' 4 our minds consumption but i've denied white lies, elements of surprise ignite! fight that like seduction i untied my binds n take pride n my gumption...this is private life construction organized chaos is my building block, thru devastation i'll make the creation patience, foundations of greatness r laid thick, other places r facin cremation see its basic, satans been chasin 4 ages, u runnin scared or pacin the races? lace up the k swiss 2day then, sacrifice all that is sacred to save us a nation under god...above u is my placin, no fadin, stayin greyish, black nor caucasian its deeper then shades of skin...its a revolution of angels and devil relations torn society, breathe! see, we're the last of a dying breed, just dying to be... tryin to be lively it seems, but likely we might be just be slightly diseased da antidote? a plan of hope is pricey you see...they've heightened the fees mite cost monetary peaks, or even da time u need 2 rise up n climb 2 ur feet they supplyin defeat while we're lyin asleep, now im wired, theres no tirin' me i'll set fire and thieve until that empires in dire need, with its sire deceased, and its entire beliefs extinct, then i believe we'll have our chance to be seen, moral fabric tapestry, angry adolescent beings n unity until at last we're free" (hook x2- sung by children) "due to the planets corruption... we are weapons of mass destruction... tick, tick, ticking away... tick, tick, ticking away, y'all just diggin' the graves... pay ransoms for our minds abductions... then resume our damage production... give, give, give us our brains... forbidden whats written, but never living as slaves..." .......supervillain the tyrant
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QUESTION: Is it even possible to improve upon perfection??? ANSWER: CRHYME SINDICATE "I remember this one time I thought I was wrong........but I was mistaken." -Unknown R.I.P. Jonathan "ONE MAN BAND/TERUMOTO" Nigro. Goodbye brother. God bless the dead. One love. Last edited by SUPERVILLAIN : 10-07-04 at 07:55 AM. Reason: spelling |
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10-08-04, 09:41 PM | #2 | |||||
~SAINT SINNER~
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IP: ABE5 5A5C
uppin' for feedback on this spur of the moment piece.
....s.v...c.s.
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QUESTION: Is it even possible to improve upon perfection??? ANSWER: CRHYME SINDICATE "I remember this one time I thought I was wrong........but I was mistaken." -Unknown R.I.P. Jonathan "ONE MAN BAND/TERUMOTO" Nigro. Goodbye brother. God bless the dead. One love. |
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10-11-04, 10:10 AM | #3 | |||||
~SAINT SINNER~
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IP: ABE5 5A5C
wow. uppin' one more time.
...s.v.
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QUESTION: Is it even possible to improve upon perfection??? ANSWER: CRHYME SINDICATE "I remember this one time I thought I was wrong........but I was mistaken." -Unknown R.I.P. Jonathan "ONE MAN BAND/TERUMOTO" Nigro. Goodbye brother. God bless the dead. One love. |
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08-09-05, 12:43 PM | #4 | ||||
Bann The Deed NOT The Breed
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IP: F7E8 406E
lol i liked it sv even if no one else payed attention
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08-09-05, 01:14 PM | #5 | |||||
Banned: Cheating
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IP: 3240 794D
This was iight, good concept....sick vocab...multis was iffy.....ur structure wass iight but ur lines was a lil too stretched man......no doubt it was nasty 8/10....rtf on my links in my sig....1
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