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Old 10-09-04, 01:30 PM   #1
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Its Love (Exclusive & Still Remain)

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When people reach out to ask for a date…
Its hard to be on time and not be late…
Some guys try to write rap songs or poetry…
To get there respect and love from there one to be…
Sometimes I just say whats up how are you today…
Some people just get nervous and just say hey…
If I had to I would smother you by giving you all my admiration…
Now that I have raised the sparks, I hit my destination…
Love is a big word, say it and if you don’t mean-it…
Your person friend might not enjoy it, and you’ll be forced to submit…
Most people don’t get married for love, but just for the money…
Love is more like when people try to make each other laugh, its funny…
Workin every damn day, us men come home to relax…
And then we find are girls cheating on us, look I know the facts…
Some people just say rude words and think there being sarcastic…
But no it feels like there chucking hard chunks of plastic…
They think it don’t hurt are feelings, they think were like elastic…
Love is when you don’t have to act in someone else’s situation…
Stand back give them room to breathe, now theres time for relaxation…

Now to the downside, let me reside
My life’s over, love is all fried,
When emotions collide and eyes cry,
This Love becomes nothing but a lie,
This lie can tell you something, what’s love worth?
When you could fall in love and end up hurt,
In the end this always happens time relapses,
And you are alone again til’ your heart collapses,
Now lets rewind, women are nice for awhile but not to kind,
They seem to whine, and leave you with just a pillow to find,
That’s all you sleep with now, no love is found,
You’re alone as you’re heart lessons its pound,
You frown; your mind says you lost her,
But you go with your heart, which concurs,
Tears pour as you recall the feeling of her hair,
Without this girl you’re naked, alone and bare,
Who cares? It’s not like she knows you miss her anyway,
She was the one and only shots of light, such a sunray,
Gleams up your world, love is great in the moment, my conclusion-
The feeling of “true love” is nothing but a mere illusion…

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Old 10-09-04, 01:36 PM   #2
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nice nice. i like this one. it had good vocab. strong feeling. good flow and structure. overall a 8.5/10. keep it up
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Old 10-09-04, 02:16 PM   #3
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yupness... upping for more feedness.
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Old 10-09-04, 02:54 PM   #4
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nice still remain had a nice verse as well...ya we uppin dis shit..
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Old 10-09-04, 07:22 PM   #5
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yo uppin for more feedback....
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Old 10-11-04, 02:36 PM   #6
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Come On We Only Got One Feedback!
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Old 10-11-04, 02:41 PM   #7
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ice both had some good structure on your shit and i know how it eels dawgs
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Old 10-11-04, 05:04 PM   #8
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^that wasent nice...i dont cry eather...ive never been dumb yet eather so...and ive dated about im not sure close to 10 gurls long relasion ships to...and i always dumped them haha
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Old 10-11-04, 10:59 PM   #9
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you guys are fags for not reading are collab...!
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