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10-10-04, 08:29 PM
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"Spirit Everlasting" Straight Freestyle...
IP: 0825 899A
Real Quick Piece...
Tryna Get You Back Into The Feel Of How I Do... I'll Have Some Polished Pieces Coming Soon Though... So Tell Me What You Think About This For Now... Verse One
Crows Feet Dance And Stroll Threw As They PleaseDance, Then Go Seat Apost This Womans Astrayd Reach Ease Of Wear Frayd Her Mouths Were At Speach Stairs Stayd Speaks Of Care Free Days When Without Greed Fair Played Continued To Way Of The Folk Spun Inuendo Like Boats Sailing On This Ends Moat Threw The Whole Brite Quote She Spoke In Tounges Of The Most Poetic Ones Weaving Her Pose Spun Of Sculliousis Tons But When Then I Spent My Time At A Glance Into Her Eye The Decend Of Time Grasped Her Mind And I Knew Ther Dien Quick Chorus See This Life Of Vibrance Is Dieing... Look Past The Stories And The Trying Pasts N'... All I Find Is A True Spirit Everlasting... See This Life Of Vibrance Is Dieing... Look Past The Stories And The Trying Pasts N'... All I Find Is A True Spirit Everlasting... Verse Two
Stare To Space, Her Hair Placed Threw Age's PaceThere, Grew A Name Heard Fairly Great To Shaken Days Ways Of Old Breaking Ones Bold Face Ina Place Of Gold Strayd From Ageing The Songs Sung Replace Dug Holes Come Sing Her Voids Closed And Anoint Her Wings Let Her Run Close To Youth And Stand Ajoint Her Kids This Old Womans Words All That Could Bring Such Cures But Not To Her Since She Stood Abscure Up Against This Hurst |
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10-10-04, 08:32 PM
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IP: ABE5 5A5C
^thats a pathetic attempt and gettin OM king back.
that wasnt fuckin rap that was a damn poem. i didnt like the flow either. i aint got shit else to say.
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10-10-04, 08:32 PM
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IP: 0825 899A
To Tell You The Truth Im Not Really Feeling This...
But Its Just A Keystyle... So It's Whatever I Guess... The Flow Is Bothering Me, Seams Off In The Begining... Blaaaaaaaaaah... Lol, Im My Hardest Critic... .One. |
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10-10-04, 08:34 PM
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IP: 0825 899A
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Lololmao... I Agree... Except I Knew This Wouldnt Get Me OM King... And Frankly I Couldnt Give A Fuck Less About That Title... I Just Wanna Get Back Into My Place... I Haven't Really Written Since August... Don't Worry, I've Got Better Ish Then This... .One. |
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