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Old 10-15-04, 05:27 PM   #1
J.D
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quick freestyle:

IP: FCEA 06E1

If rappers insult me i just kill them with my flow and ask if it was necessary
My vocab still couldn't be beat if i was battlin with a dictionary, my style varys
you get drowned down and under when i rock
i intoxicate people with drops, added with exaggurated lyrical shots
im too much of a force to be stopped, im critically hot
people step away from the area when i robotically pop
challenge me man, obviously lyrically i'll be what your not
i'll think you forgot, that my flows are undeniably top
i'll get you blocked and shocked, when i verbally attack you
my flows structure is superior to yours i'll probably flabergast you
by the power of scientifical mic imagery
i wont even be affected by rappers crappy insults, theres no way anyone is dissin me, physically
i bring suspiciously, wise rhymes onto the table
my rhymes are fable, there aint even no discussion as to whether im able, im amazingly stable
i handle these rhymes with deep thoughts of manipulation
my rhymes are incapable to handle, im stylish like 3D animation, across the nation
my rhymes are manual not automatic
thats for wack rhymers, who just tremble from static
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Old 10-16-04, 03:12 PM   #2
J.D
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could i get sum feedback for this?????????????????
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Old 10-16-04, 03:44 PM   #3
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aight mayne it was tight i was feeling it..but some lines were stretched and work on ur structure a lil bit but other than thatit was tight nice flow worplay and multi's keep it up man peace~1
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Old 10-17-04, 02:16 PM   #4
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thanx for that man
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Old 10-17-04, 02:27 PM   #5
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Not Good... Pretty Much Wack... But Your Getting There.. You Need more Practice
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Apocalypse.... In a different kind of way...
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Old 10-17-04, 04:20 PM   #6
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its pretty tight, hey, im workin ona crew now Undaground Nations or Tha UN. check it out if u interested.
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Old 10-17-04, 04:51 PM   #7
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ye, ill check your crew out man
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Old 10-17-04, 04:52 PM   #8
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WO-man thank u................................................. .
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Old 10-17-04, 04:59 PM   #9
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If rappers insult me i just kill them with my flow and ask if it was necessary
My vocab still couldn't be beat if i was battlin with a dictionary, my style varys
good flow..alright line

you get drowned down and under when i rock
i intoxicate people with drops, added with exaggurated lyrical shots
nice

im too much of a force to be stopped, im critically hot
people step away from the area when i robotically pop
challenge me man, obviously lyrically i'll be what your not
i'll think you forgot, that my flows are undeniably top
too basic

i'll get you blocked and shocked, when i verbally attack you
my flows structure is superior to yours i'll probably flabergast you
nahhh

by the power of scientifical mic imagery
i wont even be affected by rappers crappy insults, theres no way anyone is dissin me, physically
i bring suspiciously, wise rhymes onto the table
my rhymes are fable, there aint even no discussion as to whether im able, im amazingly stable
i handle these rhymes with deep thoughts of manipulation
good idea but not well put

my rhymes are incapable to handle, im stylish like 3D animation, across the nation
my rhymes are manual not automatic
thats for wack rhymers, who just tremble from static
alright

overall- 6/10

i see u have potential just keep elevatin ..........good job

and plzz return tha feed on my feed" legend is born" (its bein slept on although i think open mic of oct)
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