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Old 10-19-04, 04:11 PM   #1
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"I Really Do Love Her"

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Aiight...
Im Having Some Trouble With This Girl...
Shit Is Beyond Crazy...
I Just Need To Get This Off My Chest...
So Try Not To Bash This To Hard, I Just Need To Release Somewhere...
I Didnt Even Try With The Lyrical Content...
Dont Even Reply If You Dont Want...
I Dont Care...
.One.

[[Hook]]
Our Love Grows But Only Tangled In Town Lines...
As I Misuse You And We Now Die...
No More You And I, So Sorry...
Broken Hearts Collide With Mind In No Hurry...

[[Verse]]
So Lost, Grasp Slips As Thoughts Rip Facts...
Diff-rent Spots Yet Lips Clasp An We've Gotten Past...
Want To Look Past But Not Push Back Whats Up...
Haunt And Shook My Act And Thats Whats Ruff...
Could Tuff It, But What If I Fucked Up And Just Slipped...
This Shit Isnt Just A One Hit Thing, Cuz I Love It...
Love You So I, Shuv You To Town Line N Cut It...
Hearts Shatter As I Faulter And Break To Tears...
Nothing Matters, Hearts Draped With Years...
I Let My Gates Open And To Many Stepped In...
Never Held My Limits And Now This Girls Feet Cary Depression...
Death Of Beautiful Things But My Youth Is The Thing...
My Maturity Sets Unusual Lows And Its The Truth That Stings...
I Broke Her, Abused Her Love And I Know Its Over...
I Had To Revoke Her Cuz I Care Enough To Show Her...
Its Just To Bad I Only Could Threw A Closer...
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Old 10-19-04, 05:07 PM   #2
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nice flow dawg not bad at all...nice emotion hit hard dawg...
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Old 10-19-04, 06:01 PM   #3
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fuckin hell that was good man.
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Old 10-19-04, 06:05 PM   #4
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Thanks Mayn...
Ya, Really Cant Get Any More Emotional Then That...
All This Shit Just Happend And I Just Needed A Release...
So I Wrote About It...
Thanks For The Love On This...
.One.
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Old 10-19-04, 06:36 PM   #5
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ya man its me Xclusive you should Join D2R dawg we need you lots and um soon im gonna ahve a hard hitten song with hardcore tru story with lots of emption you better look it up
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Old 10-20-04, 06:47 AM   #6
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I Already Went With Someone...
Check My Newest Sig...
.One.
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Old 10-20-04, 08:05 AM   #7
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nice.... i liked this drop..

i going though the same thing.. i feel u u on this...
9/10...
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Old 10-20-04, 08:32 AM   #8
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Sup Emotion king, very deep drop man I was feelin that, Girls girls girls only
good for one thing..

Nice verse man stay up

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Old 10-20-04, 08:00 PM   #9
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ye this was tight, nice flow man i was feelin it. it would have been easy for this to be played but u pulled it off. i was actually a lil dissapointed it was this short i could have read on....nice job.
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Emcees depart, like rubin carter my hurricane left u scarred…
Like a spiked bat grammatical bar, like a wonderland drug…
Tumble - ing like a flagon of rum and 2 blunts, like the funk baby…
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Old 10-21-04, 04:28 PM   #10
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Well This Was Just A Spur Of The Moment Thing...
If Everyone Is Feelin It That Much Ill Make It Longer...
Cuz Me And This Girl Had Our Problems So I Have Plenty Of Material...
.One.
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