Entity's shit

We've reached lynchin' when I release sentence -like paroled petafiles
and dismantle as whole with ease. Still interested netcees rival
but never see titles, riskin they entire vitals for chance
if all you do is cum off on keystyles..
then you got alot more then just too much time on your hands (haha)
claiming they Bee, Killah or B iller Hyphens to slash arteries
Bogus as Hogan's Heros and half M*A*S*H -partially
rapping from adjacent satelites, I "side dish" like parcely
achieved through the lethal likeness of ya favorite virus
an Ol Dirty Bastard like Osirus and Big Baby Jesus
never forgive or forgotten my rabied thesis -indeed it's
"Rotten" like stolen autopsey photos and other odd pics
from the projects this speech shatters
Pissing on his "PJ's" like a 4 year old asleep -with a weak bladder
I bean each batter badder till they better off Dodgin, hopin fences
you and your lesbian squad get Dug-out handling other people's wood shaft like Rodger Clemens
on the mound your beat down was accounted and it amounted
to your bitch catching a mouthfull of vaginal foam -if she wants to be a "cunt face" about it
Sadistic -pluggin ya artistic outlet -awesomely
often E encounters theives, then gets cocked by these
cuz if my latest posts sounded wack...
then black your style wasta rubbed off on me, awefully


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Were aggregating the collesium crowds orbit,
by painting imagery that's distorted and morbid.
call me the plate tectonic of mic standards,
conquering vast kingdoms like alexander.
5th generation classed napalms.
lite navy seals with bionic time bombs,
wondering if time will ever mend this
the war with knowledge is for ever endless....


Ice picks shit

Ice Known to play syllablists with ballistic shit in past tense
cop bagz from da blac binge and design da beats you rap with
past "drastic". in a mode of juss killin' you silly bastards
pop da trunk and back in, show y'all mother fucker in charge
headlines read "LAST SEEN HEADIN' INTO A BARGE:MINIMAL SCARS"
think i heard criminal barz.....in the sudan chillin' wit' akbars
i even heard head chaeuffer in charge if whippin' pac's carz
rapper-turned-rock star... fuck dat....been re-inventin'
battle leaguin' ta show y'all what's pumpin' in the system
casualties and victims. poke out ya eyes and zip r"i"ct"i"ms
come sick like shyt pistols...hollow tip misslez foe da henchmen
come through and rip tissue to the tip that bricks tickle
like miss bickle, can't ride no dix... that's a bit fickle
takin' crabs back to they tangible mandiblez, leave da simpz crippled
bytch mc's droppin' cannonballz in the abyss....not much....but a bit rippled
with a big SICKLE, i'm POPpin' tops like ICE molsen
leavin' memoriez brought up over tears and a GOLDEN
my thoughts are not swollen, juss da heart behind ribs
smack a bytch netcee back to the days of callin' up and coppin' "lidz"


Chorus with a slite sinister voice

aggregating the collesium crowds orbit,
by painting imagery that's morbid.
call me the plate tectonic of mic standards,
conquering vast kingdoms like alexander.
5th generation classed napalms.
lite navy seals with bionic time bombs,
wondering if time will ever mend this
the war with knowledge is for ever endless....


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for the sleepers

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Im back to reclaim my thrown,,,been gone for a while,,,but yo,,,thats some real good shit hommie,,I give it A 9-10,,,oh,,,what the heck lets just say 10-10 to keep it real
God bless all

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Not minds.
So dont toss me
till to you tried me.
This is my ring.
You cant box me.
I'll drop rocky.
I've climbed the mountain's
Making all contenders obsolete.
All you bitches is running like
water fountain
knocking me!!

Defeat list
Young Beezy
out come:5-o
Lost Battles:none
out come
none

thanks fo the feedback

im not use to people replying

drop some shit man and let me peep it

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This Was Official.verses Were Hot Chorus Was Hot.10/10

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I'm like CHUCKy dyin' to live in the flesh free of the BATTERY,
ASSAULT n ROBBERY rapidly,wishin' cupid would clap at me
N lift this evil spell so I can experience happilly evil backwards-see(down there)
EVIL............backwards =............LIVE

HOLY SHIT you guys,,this was some of the dopest shit i ever read in this forum, flow was ill, and your verses were incredible,,this was fire overall, great job in this,,and i love the chorus...1

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*FluidMusic*


*Poetic Scriptures Moderator*

great shit.....ill definitely nominate this one for open mic of the month or whatever......one of the best ive ever seen on the open mic.....i was feelin it 10/10......flow was good...structure was pretty good....multis were there....just a nice verse overall.........return the favor....my threads are call why? ike version...and everything one of my first songs....thanks...keep droppin

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Thanks
for the feed

I was wondering why this was getting slept on...

IKE i will peep your shit n a lil bit , after i eat

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