So wut if IM INSANE an have half a BRAIN....It only takes one maniac to fly an airPLANE...Crash it an collapse a BUILDING/
No IM not a terrorist but I do bring terror/ If ya really wanna scary sight try lookin in the MIRROR/
Tellin me I should go to a new SITE...But after this you'll be found on a NEWS SITE, with their worst journalist sayin you cant write...An thats jus me puttin it to ya polite/
An I know I aint a nuclear physicist or a ROCKET-SCIENTIST/
But I do know how to hook yo momma up wit my COCK-AN-APPLIANCES/
Cuz after this IM-a use ya head on ya momma's door like a DOOR-KNOCKER...AN when she answers we goin to her BED where IM-a KNOCK-HER...Not your idea of "Meet The Parents" is it? ya dumb FAUCKER*...I can HELP I was raised in HELL an made ignorant like JOHN-ROCKER/
Think ya can get platinum status off this? Ya JOKIN-RIGHT...Cuz ya couldn't come close to gold at Chuck -e -Cheese on free TOKEN-NIGHT/
Could never make it big cuz ya girl aint STROKIN-RIGHT...So Why would ya waist ya time on here or on the OPEN-MIC?/
Maybe instead of writin high you should write DRUNK...Cuz ALCHOHAL will lower ya for the FALL when ya go KERPLUNK/
So next TIME don't rhyme wit nonsense an cheap TALK...But until then do like ya local 7-11 an take a BIG-GULP/
By tha way I don't got perminent Brain Freeze/
U do cuz u sucked down 1 to many losser SLURPEES/
~1~ UPPIN
* Ben Stiller from the flick "Meet The Parents"

Wut's wrong with this battle verse? ~1~

creative but alomst to cheezy. although the line about john rocker wz cool. same goes for the line b4 that one. not hatin just not feelin. it might work in a battle though1

i agree, a little corny. but you do what you got to do. pretty good wordplay, a little long but still aight. you got room for improvement, no diss necessary.

cool for that fast of a vs. we all ryt sumpin corny when we write fast. jus keep doin wut u do.

if u get a chance check my open mic. For them $$$hungry hoes