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10-28-04, 12:15 AM
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Banned: Compromised Account
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Litmus Test... (Test Of Purity)
IP: A9A5 2BC6
crouched in a corner of committed suicide.. A thousand screams of shattered glass reflect our past... In a slience of sililoques...and sweet silhouettes.. Broken past my fractured heart..never to be mend again... Chained to a pond of memory in my mind.. Aside it...the voice of thought ripple it's surface , Like blue scarfs whipping in the wind... backflashes enter my mind like the steps of psychic insight.. Unable to fight tears they roll down the cliffs of my cheeks.. Crashing in to more boulders... Seeping thru the walls the souls of nostalgia.. The hands of time point onward but I cannot leave... Your ghost is forever upon my shoulders like The weight of your sudden absence... Who would of thought something so quick Could hurt for so long.. We were meant to be or so it seemed.. is happiness but a worm that blossoms to sorrow..? Or have i misjudged the whispers of the touchstone in my heart? I used to think,..you know.. us..? Was the purest love ever to be felt.. But what is love unless it's mutual.. How can love be mutual with a spirit.. i brought you flowers the other day..I sang.. But..Did u hear it.. i guess i'm supposed to have faith... Another impalpable submission.. I was saved by the hands of YouR grace And wasn't there at your last breath.. Not even there to listen.. They say the thing you think about the most when you die.. Is what you will return to when you cross.. Well...I'm thinking of you now.. I take it you already know my next thought.. Drinking the unprescribed elexir..so keep the doors open.. Just to wake up in some unowned white garments.. I'm in denial to the litmus test of this loves purity.. but no matter how hard i try n fake The next time i'll kiss you will be in memory Love. |
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10-28-04, 12:25 AM
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<<-Carpe Noctum->>
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IP: 0825 899A
wow,this was written beautifully, great poem,this had dope vocabulary and flow,great emotion in this piece too, nice job man..keep em coming..1
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10-28-04, 12:33 AM
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A Reflection Of The Past
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IP: ABE5 5A5C
word...
im feeling the imagery and emotion you always seem to bring to your pieces,also the complex style and structure to it,im loving this man....damn hotness me and you are do for another collab real soon
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10-28-04, 03:03 PM
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Banned: Compromised Account
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IP: 456D 2E0B
yeah we is man.... ill figure something out real soon
uppin for some more feedback |
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10-30-04, 12:51 PM
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Banned: Permanent
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IP: 456D 2E0B
uppin give this dead nigga some feedback
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11-08-04, 03:10 AM
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Back In Business
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IP: 9DD1 2DB9
shyt.... i though ice pick shyt was hot but this here...this shyt is classic... it had everything! imagery, killer emotion, vocabulary, style, the metaphors and similes were incredible here... good drop yo... i see why ya brought this over from RB!
*by the way... a lot of kats might not catch what ya did but nice touch with the color change in the verse [litmus test]...good shyt! |
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