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Old 10-30-04, 03:28 AM   #1
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I control to fold the mold of truth,
raps a spoof, like the 4 chins of ruth,
the hoax wasn't aparent,sweeped them bitches,
then snitches got paid, uncle said they fixed this
I said naw, that's not the game it is,
then he informed me on the time it is,
life isn't truthful, and anything for making cents,
Even if a life of making a lot of sense,
for some meager cents, doesn't have a pretence
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Old 10-30-04, 03:33 AM   #2
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aight with the multi yo, you got potential tryout for the wiseman crew
get at my open mics yo
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Old 10-30-04, 09:30 AM   #3
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cool piece.nice words.stay up.
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Old 10-30-04, 09:38 AM   #4
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decent not bad but i need to read more from u.....

the multis was good, the flow was decent N that was it....
cuz the verse was short but not bad....

drop feed back on this

http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post1700503
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