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Old 11-01-04, 09:29 AM   #1
Dex
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Red face 5th November freestyle! Fireworks

IP: CD98 49E3

A quick keystyle i just done with Firework night in mind. What do you think??

Smiling as im filing in my words and slurs/
Blurs and firs… stirs so much its absurd/
-Word up,and peace to the kids in college/
Raise your hand to mcs-and pay homage//
Stop me… from, going too far/
Crackers up my nose and bombs in my arse/
Driving in the quick lane, speed too fast/
Travel thru time and live in the past//
Bring rap to the middle ages, old places/
Slap a chat at King H the 8th
Heat a beat with my feet, witness the stunned faces//
Begin a new following of wannabe WeeDexes/
My very own horror team of sharp reflexes//
Put a firework over all of Essex/
Cos im restless/
Aint got shit to do/
Find Guy Fawkes, resurrect him too/
Escort the Guy to where George Bush lives/
Give a little fib…
“it’s the houses of parlia-ment”/
Stand back and admire my best lies/
Hand out the honours of mischief in the night/
Thrown on the bonfire, “penny for the guy”//

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Old 11-02-04, 06:24 AM   #2
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Question Aaah..

IP: CD98 49E3

No one wants to look at my shit.

Come on you read it, you rate it. Its not difficult!
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Old 11-02-04, 01:42 PM   #3
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nice piece.liked the last two lines best.keep em comin'.
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I'm like CHUCKy dyin' to live in the flesh free of the BATTERY,
ASSAULT n ROBBERY rapidly,wishin' cupid would clap at me
N lift this evil spell so I can experience happilly evil backwards-see(down there)
EVIL............backwards =............LIVE
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Old 11-02-04, 01:55 PM   #4
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Sup man nice drop kinda losted you in some places but
I can understand it more coz I'm English and from Essex
lol.

Nice drop needs a little work but it was a decent verse.

Stay up

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