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View Poll Results: Capital Punishment vs. Verbal Abuse
Capital Punishment 1 16.67%
Verbal Abuse 5 83.33%
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Old 11-03-04, 12:02 AM   #1
eph
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Capital Punishment vs Verbal Abuse

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Old 11-03-04, 12:04 AM   #2
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Verbal Abuse has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-03-04 12:04 AM.
 
Old 11-03-04, 12:06 AM   #3
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Capital Punishment has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-03-04 12:06 AM.
 
Old 11-03-04, 12:31 AM   #4
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Capitol Punishment:

proof read ya current battles. i spit, and lies get delt.
with that sig and 3 aliases. ya may as well dick ride ya self.
dont hide ya belt. we see ya rec cant come with better clues.
our difference is, i dare to battle the emcees who are known to never lose.
you perfer ya newbs. rematch? us battling before came as news.
i never knew. ya regret once i diss you like chapelle exposes maiden jews.
you top ma faken nudes. were not interested like how biblicals taught sex.
this is punishment: rearrange ya name, your topical not text. (capitol/topical)
if i dropped you in the laundry basket, ya couldnt spawn clean.
ya dripping with flaw, you couldnt reign the polls if you were prom queen.


^^^warm up

my verse:

ya useless like small portions of sugar in juices, ya need adjusting.
ya haven't dissed me yet. those aren't bruises, im blushing.
your not even the real capitol, ya cant shake the rep.
& circumsizing animals in clinics unfortunatley dont make ya vet.
your adolesence underestimated, like thinking fungus wont infect.
the only way youll win: is to change ya sig, so my punches dont connect.

took me 12 minutes. blah.
 
Old 11-03-04, 12:43 AM   #5
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done already pimped this ho once, an example look at schema's avatar *
this bitch could be eating a hershey or snickers and still not have a bar
guess this is round 2, ya lost round 1, u should be really ashamed bitch
her 5th l, i'm bout to abuse verbal, in other words it's her name flipped *
look at ya record, damn i've seen newbs with better stats then what u got *
va beating me there's a better chance of seeing ray charles in a tube top
look everyone.., verbal has taken empires spot as rapverse's internet ho *
and i'm ripping this bitch easily like walking dogs in a winter pet show
femcee tourny is rigged, here's an example she's won twice for no shows *
drops a vote for me, heads big from the ns, brake her ego like $1 yo yo's
lost to me once already but i guess ya didn't learn, u didn't have enough
where's ya verse at because ya punches ain't hitting like gravity's stuck
accepted my call saying don't stall, u a bitch so quit trying to be tough
no ones feels ya drop, it's like paralysis victims being raped and beat up
feel bad, i mean u must really be discriminated against for being mexican
u could even fucking plagerise my verse and still not win this text again

*beat her once 5-2
*her name backwards
*has 4 losses
*sends her pic around
*check the femcee/
natural selection
 
Old 11-03-04, 12:49 AM   #6
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uppin for honest explained non d/r votes peeps
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SPul: 20,000/10,000 debt
Verbal Abuse: lied about not battling me in verse

4 wins - 1 losses - 1 ko


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Old 11-03-04, 11:09 AM   #7
Mc_BaD_bOy
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Voted For: Verbal Abuse

punches-VA
strture-VA(by far)
pers-none
met-none
multis-none
spellings-VA

VA-
win by far had more punches even tho littler verse had way better stuture that others guy was wack

v/ VA

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.
 
Old 11-03-04, 04:07 PM   #8
eph
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thanks for the honest vote. most appreciated.
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Old 12-31-04, 04:55 PM   #9
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This was feedback posted for Capital Punishment

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Old 01-05-05, 10:17 PM   #10
Tha Unknown (Uk)
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Voted For: Verbal Abuse

I vote for Verbal cuz of tha structure....................
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Old 01-05-05, 10:19 PM   #11
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This was feedback posted for Capital Punishment

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Cant Vote This Battle Is Too Hot To Vote On Lol. .
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Old 01-06-05, 03:25 PM   #12
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Voted For: Verbal Abuse

va had a ok opener...Punches Where great connecting sum of the time...Vocab was pretty good seen better from you...Structure not bad but not good...Flow was good...need just a lil more elavating and you got it goin for ya..

cp ok opener..Punches where alright...Vocab alrite...Structure started gettin boring for me...Flow was tite so that means it was good....

v/va but just by a microscopic bit...both are almost to the top of there game...so keep workin this was a good battle
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Old 01-15-05, 06:42 PM   #13
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Voted For: Capital Punishment

VA: decent drop from you...punches were weak though, much of it i wasnt feelin, u had a decent structure & the flow was good but the punches werent really there though...elevate

C.P. decent drop from you too, punches were kinda hard hittin but overall it landed...ur structure was in place & not stretched out...flow was a little too long tho but wasnt chopped up though...but overall u took this one-came harder
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Old 01-17-05, 11:39 AM   #14
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Voted For: Verbal Abuse

I felt abuse more on this one he just came harder his punches where a little soft but keep working on that home and he had more multis better vocab.

His opener to his closure was better then the other dudes no hate just keep elevating and his rhyming scheme and his lyrics flowed better with me


8.8/10
 
Old 01-29-05, 02:38 PM   #15
Scareface
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Voted For: Verbal Abuse

Aii This Is What I Feel

VB
Opener:

proof read ya current battles. i spit, and lies get delt.
with that sig and 3 aliases. ya may as well dick ride ya self.
dont hide ya belt. we see ya rec cant come with better clues.
our difference is, i dare to battle the emcees who are known to never lose.
Hade Me ROTFL bcuz if its true that line right There lit em up Nice I give your Opening 10/10[/b]

Body Lines and Texture:
[i]im Not Gonna Talk Bout All your bars ima pick my favorite and explain it My Favorite was:

you top ma faken nudes. were not interested like how biblicals taught sex.
this is punishment: rearrange ya name, your topical not text. (capitol/topical)
if i dropped you in the laundry basket, ya couldnt spawn clean.
ya dripping with flaw, you couldnt reign the polls if you were prom queen.
That 2 bars rii There Jus Made my Mind up Immedietly So I Went Ahead And Ill Give you a 9/10
Closing:
your adolesence underestimated, like thinking fungus wont infect.
the only way youll win: is to change ya sig, so my punches dont connect.
Shouldve Been your Closer But Still You held it strong and Took The battle

CP
done already pimped this ho once, an example look at schema's avatar *
this bitch could be eating a hershey or snickers and still not have a bar
guess this is round 2, ya lost round 1, u should be really ashamed bitch
her 5th l, i'm bout to abuse verbal, in other words it's her name flipped *
look at ya record, damn i've seen newbs with better stats then what u got *
va beating me there's a better chance of seeing ray charles in a tube top
look everyone.., verbal has taken empires spot as rapverse's internet ho *
and i'm ripping this bitch easily like walking dogs in a winter pet show
femcee tourny is rigged, here's an example she's won twice for no shows *
drops a vote for me, heads big from the ns, brake her ego like $1 yo yo's
lost to me once already but i guess ya didn't learn, u didn't have enough
where's ya verse at because ya punches ain't hitting like gravity's stuck
accepted my call saying don't stall, u a bitch so quit trying to be tough
no ones feels ya drop, it's like paralysis victims being raped and beat up
feel bad, i mean u must really be discriminated against for being mexican
u could even fucking plagerise my verse and still not win this text again
Ima Use your whole Verse and compare it To VB'z compared to it you came Very Weak ummmm Your Personals didnt Connect Hard ass they shouldve /........Far As How you opened up Ya Verse It Was Weak you closed stronger than you Opened ...Thats Jus How i feel And I feel that you couldve done betta

PLEASe RTF PLEASE IM BEGGING MY BATTLES GETTIN SLPET ON PLEASE PLEASE ./..............THE LINKS IN MY SIG
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