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You can find me guiding light within the eyes of storms/
Reflection in the Iris reveals a disguise with horns/
Destruction and demise reveals a mortal child’s scorn/
The thorn peeled from Mary’s womb as Christ was born/
Concealed in a tomb depicting the crucifixion of forms/
Deep holes engraved into wrists twist and conform/
Just as the darkness shines in storms of light sand and mist/
I too command night to fight with the right hand and fist/
As I recite the psalms of the Torah and Koran/
The core’s spawn slowly rises upon Earth’s dawn/
As we await for the messiah to arrive-
Those who die during Apocalypse do not procreate or revive/
Banished to hell for their suffering to commence/
Suspended in Purgatory as their mind and soul condense/
Powers too intense for the understanding of man’s finds/
Splitting pines staffs in half with verbiage of the mind/
As I rap maligned and slash those entitled “refined”,
I laugh and cackle at the state and collapse of mankind/
Those who challenge me beckon the destruction of Earth/
I’ve surpassed Plato’s teachings and ruptured his work/
I crack chains and smash bleeding veins as I collapse brains/
Find you toe-tagged with your first proceeding your last name/
I stay contrasting fame, glamour and glitz/
Combat pain with heated hammers and wit/
Escape surfaces as I borough deep in the underground/
Cast a spell on amps and speakers and create thunderous sounds/
Dethrone the king, keep his head and cremate the crown/
Frown upon the renowned and muffle the shouts of drowned/
The blood of weak rush rampant like open seas/
My expertise squeezes MCs until my appetite is appeased/
Sacrificed in threes, they swing from the branches of trees/
Tied with the MIC cord rapped around their hands and feet…
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Feedback, please..

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uppin' kats...lemme know how the verse was...

I'll post a continuation later...

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Ayo thanks for the fuckin' feedback...

Where's the love at...

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yo i really like ur work "tek".tight drop.everything was good to me.10/10

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I'm like CHUCKy dyin' to live in the flesh free of the BATTERY,
ASSAULT n ROBBERY rapidly,wishin' cupid would clap at me
N lift this evil spell so I can experience happilly evil backwards-see(down there)
EVIL............backwards =............LIVE

^appreciate the props, homie.

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uppin' yall...lemme get some help with elevatin' my lyrics...

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hot like fire.....
all around flow good, creativeness was good all around tight...

9.9 outta 10......

come join the family we got open mic spots open for ya....
and text battlers holla mang one...