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11-06-04, 04:22 PM
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Bonecrushing Nigga
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Most Wanted
IP: 98C0 39B0
This was one of my most weakest open mics.... weeeerd i did this in about 45 mins......
Most Wanted (On The Run) Part One Hook I’m on the run (on the run) moving from place to place. But they’re coming on me close from the tracks they trace. You can’t catch me, im always one step ahead of them. And all their plans to capture me, is all fucking irrelevant. Chorus L.A., New York, Detroit, Brooklyn, to the M.I.A. Searching in them cities, ya looking the wrong way. So stop ya efforts, or I’m leaving the state blasting. My plans and attacks are deadly, im the #1 assassin. So P’s dangerous, you better back away from me, son Cause bitch im on the run, I’m the most wanted one. FaluKun (Continuing Verse) ………………………………………… …………………………………… ………………………………………… ……………………………….. ………………………………………… ……………. Yeah, the police can’t catch me im moving I can’t be stopped. The po-lice efforts trying to catch me, but many been shot. I’m most wanted, so I better be careful, I could be caught. I wanted to stop, but I have to go on, as a fucking criminal. Told to stop this serial killing, but the message is subliminal. I’m always moving, I don’t know if there is police undercover. Almost close to capture, cause my whole gang was outnumbered. The gang’s paying me 900k for assassination of the president. I need the money, so my plan is to act like a regular…. (Gunshot) ………. (Cuts Off) ………………………………………… ………………………………………. ………………………………………… ………………………….. Resident. (Continues… First Verse Ends) (Hook 1) (Chorus) Paramik (Beginning verse) I was a young boy with no need for this fucking life of crime. But I was tempted by peer pressure to ruin the life of mines. To many times, I’ve missed capture by the fucking police. Cause im always on the run, they just cant keep the peace. And im only 14, can’t believe the crimes I’m committing. So I gotta express my thoughts on this, by rappin’ and spittin’. I’m admitting I did wrong, but the judges wont take that. I was caught so many times in a shootout with my gat. Fuck the police, they always making a gangstas life tough. I almost got handcuffed, but I was like “enough is enough” (kills them) (Hook 1) (Chorus) In My Life… I got so much to blame myself…. In My Life… I did so much wrong I hate myself……………. ………………………………………… ………………. ………………………………………… ……………………….. Part 2 Up Soon.
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Guess who?... ...Paramik Fuckin'...
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11-06-04, 04:26 PM
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Bonecrushing Nigga
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IP: 98C0 39B0
OMG jsut reading it... it sounds fucked up......
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Guess who?... ...Paramik Fuckin'...
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11-06-04, 04:36 PM
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Flyweight
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IP: 3AE8 B82C
man dat was hott i like dta man ya structa was nice
u had good vocab.u shoulda added 1 more verse though return da fav.
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11-06-04, 06:53 PM
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Flyweight
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IP: 7705 F93A
Sounds good on here.....But to sit there and verbally spit this does not sound right
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11-08-04, 11:39 AM
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Banned
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IP: 46C3 56BC
this shit aint flow right to me mang...
maybe the way im reading it... elevate N keep droping them.... |
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11-08-04, 06:16 PM
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IP: 28AD 5545
structure was very nice, flow was off in certain places.. not bad keep droppin' that hot stuff..
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