i am entrapped,
in this world of hatred and violence,
the world we live in,
is like a war for life,
planes chrasing into buildings,
whats next,
a world explosion,
causing massive death,
when will it stop,
the continuous violence,
at times i want to take my life,
just so i can end it.

dats some deep shyt. short but tight. keep postin fam. uno

so well put...in such a short piece...kinda hard hitting....

....i'm feeling ya style c-mack...one of the best short piece writers on here...respect..

uppin thanks varentao

yeh def hits u hard for a short piece was feeling the emotion..

awesome peice full of emotion.. the flow was awesome, the vocab was good, and the message was spoken with pure truth... had enuf agressiveness to make it angry, without being over-agressive... i loved it... i cant pick out fave lines cuz i dont have ne cuz it was really short, but even in the shortness it held complexities.. keep it flowin

thanks uppin

SHort but tells somany truths
powerful piece goo dvocab

keep doin ur thing