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Old 11-16-04, 09:59 AM   #1
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Fake niggaz

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i hate fake gangstas that flip-flop in different areas to me there lame
that wanna be down wit certain people so they can have street fame
neva put a finger on a gun but claim that be bustin rounds constantly
when the only time they bustin rounds is when there gettin beat up in boxing
pushing people to a limit like a swingset by a edge of a cliff
be the first person to jump up stupid but be tempted to put up there fist
i know people know like that in my hood some start at a young age
sellin dope and servin these feens like there in baseball
tough call when you hit a curve ball and get caught by the law
Im not going to lie at a young age i did sell a little to keep food on the plate
Then realized my fate since my nigga got clapped in front of my face
Man i didn't know that bullets could do so much damage
Went into the doctors a couple minutes he just vanished
Dammit..... now i listen to the choices and not the voices
being gangsta is not the only thang thats important
now i know theres people that u can think of thats similar to this
so drop some feedback on this and tell me some areas i missed


just a quick keystyle about fake niggaz and how they act

give me some feedback and tell me what you think
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Old 11-16-04, 11:38 AM   #2
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it was coo...multis were there could a been more complex tho

but nice drop
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Old 11-18-04, 09:26 AM   #3
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thanx dogg ippn for more......
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Cook and clean for the kid like silly in color purple
I know you wanna pop me but
If I hit you first, the exit wound gon be the size of a hockey puck
Fuck, I really hold the rubber
I send Sparks at you and I don't mean Emilio or Bubba

-lloyd banks



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Old 11-18-04, 10:22 AM   #4
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Drop Was Cool.some Parts Seemed A Little Off To Me But I Got Ur Point.up Ur Vocab And Ull Be Ok.7/10.keep Em Comin'
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