Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 11-18-04 at 07:33 PM

Must drop verse in 1440 minutes after check in.

Cata.clys.Mic has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-17-04 07:40 PM.

WeeDex has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-17-04 07:47 PM.

I thought i put the rules as 6-10 lines. Aint that wat we playin? i am anyway

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http://community.rapverse.com/showt...396#post1738396. =If you can be bothered read this first and look at this cat's posts, you might laugh even more.

Easy peesy lemon squeezy to beat cataclysmic, don’t need beats
Sleazy feeble wee little kiddy im eatin you like a meat feast.

No sweet greet to RV. You wont get one from good me,
Its known you already gave yourself one* as Big Woody.
If you not the same person and im wrong, Don’t want to boil you up
Like Big Woody probably already done in your school’s toilets

OK you live in the same hood,
But just cos he gave you some great wood
Don’t ride his dick in rv posts and let me notice its not good!

*get it? gave himself one.

Put this kid in a boxing ring, don’t expect him to throw any punches…****
Packin Miami jerseys inplace of heat, only packs school lunches…*
The kid has to smoke Weed-ex to get cancer and to get his shit flowin…***
Look at the kids structure, makes it as if he wants to go off roadin…
Surround himself w/death shows hes willing to accept it, but cant give it…**
Knock ya head off ya necks pivot, leave it w/ 2 divits and a lose rivet…

****his sig says he wont punch but he’ll pull out a gun
*Miami jersey of miami heat…
**his crew is da rip, a reaper crew?!?!?
***Weed-ex is his name, weed you smoke, and ex as in ex lax

Voted For: Cata.clys.Mic

Cata.clys.Mic won dis he came harderharder punches better strture but the bit u put in italic u sud put in bold aswell cuz it dont show out that much but Cata.clys.Mic get my vote came harder than weedex,
weedex came ok but no were near as good his struture was off puinches were ok flow was off mutis had them but was shit

v/ Cata.clys.Mic

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

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Nice verses both of u, but Weedex...mayne we are different peeps! Red Beam, Phat Dyke i mean Mic, Sean C., Creativitie, Lyrical Havok; we all go to or used to go to tha same school. We all registered on to this site from our school computers mayne

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:.:Relaunched Originals:.:

Eazy Duz It Bitch...or get Popped

uppin 4 votes........................................

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Voted For: WeeDex

ay both was nice but weedex had dis shit. the opener was fuckin confusing but he gets it for better punches and word play. hes punches hit nice and wordplay was sick. Big Woody....i mean cata wat ever u was aiiight. the heat line was hotness. kepp elevatin both....no hate v~weedex

vote honestly here

http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=160660

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

Voted For: Cata.clys.Mic

weedex's verse was weak...cata won it...both needed to improve on thier ending and vocab....cata had better punches which is basically wut won him da battle...weedex's structure was off and it didnt flow and it had terrible punches...cata just needed to work on his end line..i didnt like nuthin from weedex's verse...cat's was OKAY but he difinitly won...my vote goes to cata.clys.mic

I dont normally like to have to explain my verses or myself in any way but its obvious that for some people i have to.

Easy peesy lemon squeezy to beat cataclysmic, don’t need beats
Sleazy feeble wee little kiddy im eatin you like a meat feast. -So there are no multis???? Just to show you, im gonna put all multis in bold. Keep reading.
-also you might wanna try reading this a bit quicker if you wanna get it, if you can that is.

No sweet greet to RV. You wont get one from good me, =Read the link at the top of the page and you'll get this.
Its known you already gave yourself one* as Big Woody.
If you not the same person and im wrong, Don’t want to boil you up
Like Big Woody probably already done in your school’s toilets =Boil up and toilets may not perfectly rhyme but sound very similar where im from.

=Like i say, read the link at the top and the conversation between Big Woody, cat and someone else and you'll get me. In fact you'll like this.

OK you live in the same hood,
But just cos he gave you some great wood -im sure you must know what it means to give someone wood (dick, rod, cock)
Don’t ride his dick in rv posts and let me notice its not good! -Try reading this line a bit quicker aswel, then you'll realise the flow is tops.


I only had to do this for the likes of DJ kid and eastcoast.
DJ Kid, thanks for taking the time anyway, at least you were honest i respect that. But EASTCOAST, you wouldnt no a good verse if it slapped you in the face (which one of mine already has may i add). Stop hate voting. Just cos u obviously been cheating against me and JPoll and he's trying to get you DQ'd. If you aint gonna be fair FUCK OFF! If you want to know wat i mean:

"i didnt like nuthin from weedex's verse"
"weedex's structure was off and it didnt flow and it had terrible punches"
-Yeah alrite, what was you reading? Fair enuf if your gonna voice opinion but thats just bullshit!!

Carnage, well done, you understand it. Thanks for the vote.

Cata, sorry for all this complaining bro. Its bad enough wen your not getting votes but wen people obvioulsy dont get you and say that your shit, gets a little annoying

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Oh and Big Woddy, i know your not the same, but i entertained myself a bit there. To make it a bit personal

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lol.....anyway....uppin 4 votes....................

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uppin for votes...................................

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