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Old 11-21-04, 10:39 PM   #1
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*Want Some Feedback On These Two*

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.::Both Of These Just Have The Hook and First Verse To Them::.

Waitng On The Other Members To Drop but I Wanted To Know What You All Thought So Far...

"Introspection" and "No Stoppin Us"

Please Listen and Drop Feedback

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Old 11-21-04, 10:45 PM   #2
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listening...

i liek the beat to introspection..
first verse: flow is on on and off alot.. so i guess overall decent.. hard to hear what ur saying sometimes...

lol i thought there was gonnabe more versdes eh.. guess its unfinished.. its iight so far.. ur kinda loud on the beat tho.. turn ur self down a bit.. but u gettin alot better than what u were at last time u dropped.. workl on not speeding up like twista in the most unexpecting places lmao.. fucked me up
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Old 11-21-04, 10:59 PM   #3
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Nice..Thanks For The Feedback..

Yea I Am Still Elevating With Flow...Trying Diffrent Shit...I Will Edit This Verse Prolly Tomorrow and Fix It Up..

Check Out "No Stoppin Us" ALso If You Get The Chance Pimp.

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