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Old 11-24-04, 02:49 AM   #1
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()()()the Corner()()()

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A crack addict awoke to relies the beast had been released
Standing on the only corner in the city not yet being policed
Outlines of past mc's litter the street and footpaths of corruption
The only thing that would stop me now is a Jupiter size eruption
Showing no fear standing on this one corner alone in the dark
Foolish mc's have come to think this tree has being rid of bark
But the kids have nothing that has not already been played
I have earned my spot and this will be a place that I’ll always stay
Been tested by fakers that think they can roll with real g's
Asking questions of why the streets are littered of past mc's
This corner is the reason why I keep walking so fucking tall
Quotations of the fact that I beat my head against the wall
Pissed at the reason why people testing me more then ever before
Make the crowd jump up and down leaving them with saddle sore
As I stand on this unlit street corner my motivation unswayed
The darkness looking more accepting as the lights begin to fade
As a ghost unheralded by Horrific Scenes of violence
I never have submitted to any votes of compliance
Get out my face, become unnoticed before I blow off the gauge
This dark corner has become the place that I will always stay.

Some corner’s push dro some push crack
But this corner ain’t the same it got my back
Some corners roll in a Benz some roll in a 2004 beamer
But my corner wont give me that cause we gota be meaner

Lives passing here seem to think that they can show me up
Well I’m here to stay I’ll stand right here with one finger up
Darkness ain’t the only thing that keeps me going on
I’ve stood at a arduous road that stretch forever long
my life wont be they same by the end of my journey here
Placed upon my shoulders responsibility I couldn’t bare
But that made me stronger because I’m still standin right here
I wield no pistol, no Mack ten or even a 12 gauge shotgun
Because my word is what will pull me from darkness into the sun
I have seen many people before me fight for this position
From selfless acts of violence to even a lethal composition
Yet I stand strong here knowing of the man I will become
Out of all emotions I have lost there is still left only one
Anger I have for people that think they can do what I do best
Laid outlines of friends and fellow mc’s put down to rest
In memory of all these people names we shall lest forget

Some corner push weed and some push crack
But this corner ain’t the same it always got my back
Some corners roll in a Benz some roll in a 2004 beamer
But my corner wont give me that cause we gota be meaner

Like an unknown solider standing on the edge universe
Marching into the infinite past an enemies own turf
As Armageddon reigns and the four horsemen return
I will beg them for forgiveness cause death is what I learn
Death doesn’t scare me I have know him well
Will I pass the gates into heaven only time will tell?
Greeted with open arms by mc’s that have passed before me
Yet this corner is a long and dark one that will be my life
I will stand struggling through all my pain and strife
I have no regrets to what I have accomplished
There is no one else I’d rather be or life that I would switched
Because at the end of the day life is a fucking bitch
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Old 11-24-04, 02:54 AM   #2
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nice drop, stayed on topic the whole way thru. good rhyme's good use of word's.
I thought the hook could a been a bit better,but apart from that nice drop.
keep them coming.
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Old 11-24-04, 09:39 AM   #3
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yea mayn like FI-DEL said da hook couldve been betta...and
i wasnt really feelin da second verse as much as da third
and first but it was still a good drop
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Old 11-24-04, 09:57 AM   #4
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good drop.well thought out.hook was kinda weak but not a bad drop.
8/10 keep em comin'
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N lift this evil spell so I can experience happilly evil backwards-see(down there)
EVIL............backwards =............LIVE
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Old 11-30-04, 03:47 AM   #5
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